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October 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
My dear, you are a very talented spinner of tales, but you do at times love some consonants overmuch e.g. "controll" and "allright" and sometimes the terrible homonyms of the English language give you pause to reflect. See: http://www.cooper.com/alan/homonym_list.html If there were a means to send you an email, I would have mentioned these things privately. Praise that you well deserve should be in the public reviews. I would not have reviewed at all if you weren't a superior writer.
with respect and affection for your work.
with respect and affection for your work.
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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought the story was very interesting and entertaining. I like the way the two characters gradually came together. The fact that Hermione didn't need months (if not years) of counseling was odd, but #1 this IS fiction and #2 you explained that she was very strong and #3 she had Snape who was a very caring lover.
I don't mean to be a pain, but reading this story would have been much more enjoyable for me had there not been so many repeated spelling errors. Surely, you or your beta has spell-check? I was constantly distracted by the following words being misspelled: minutes, alright, receive, weird, whether, their, patrol, and several others. Also, a 'counselor' is someone you talk to, 'councilor' is a member of local government.
Final word - Good story and I will be watching for more from you.
I don't mean to be a pain, but reading this story would have been much more enjoyable for me had there not been so many repeated spelling errors. Surely, you or your beta has spell-check? I was constantly distracted by the following words being misspelled: minutes, alright, receive, weird, whether, their, patrol, and several others. Also, a 'counselor' is someone you talk to, 'councilor' is a member of local government.
Final word - Good story and I will be watching for more from you.
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice ending! I liked the story and glad you finished it! You\'re a great writer! Keep it up!
Tiffany
Tiffany
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello BotticellisAngel,
Thank you for the wonderfull story. I read it before, but it wasn\'t finished jet and it is and I read it again. Took me quite some time to do so and I enjoyed every minute of it.
FranB
Thank you for the wonderfull story. I read it before, but it wasn\'t finished jet and it is and I read it again. Took me quite some time to do so and I enjoyed every minute of it.
FranB
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~sniff sniff~ that was great and i love the endding i cant wait in till your next story and the update on It Is the East and She Is the Sun sooooooooo in till then keep up the awesome work andlater for now
angel
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is there to be a sequel perhaps....maybe not, I\'m not sure if there is enough to make more then a few chapters.... but either way, it\'s sad it\'s come to an end. But well done, and I wish you all the best with your future writings!
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww...how sweet. I just love happy endings. Thanks for writing this story. You have entertained me greatly with it. I am only saddened with it being over but all good things must come to an end. I hope one of your next stories will be Hermione/Snape again. I\'ll be watching for it.