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for Blood Oranges

by Cyranothe2nd

schedule April 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM

Interesting. But I feel like I'm missing something.

"His head darted down and took one of her nipples into his mouth.

person Anon
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Harriett
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Short and tart and sweet.

For the jealous and inadequate reviewer... what is cyperspace, dear?
person Snape\'s woman
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Smut? very poorly written! not dirty in any way. very boring. not worth the space it takes up in cyperspace.
person feral
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SO the first! haha! nice fic-- coincidentally, blood oranges rock
-feral
person Gracie
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was good. Original. That was refreshing. My only complaint was the abrupt ending, but it somehow fit. Thanks for posting this. It was worth reading