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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just as much fun to read the second time.
Hey, what about that sequel you mentioned?
Hey, what about that sequel you mentioned?
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! I t cant end there. It just cant!!! Plz update! I am begging you!!!
Aleerah
Aleerah
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t think the idea is bad, even though it\'s been done before.
But I had to stop reading because of the spelling mistakes. I know I may sound rough, but using Word\'s spell checker is not that difficult. A Beta would also help.
But I had to stop reading because of the spelling mistakes. I know I may sound rough, but using Word\'s spell checker is not that difficult. A Beta would also help.
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi , i just read your story and i like it
i hope you do a other one
i can\'t waith to see what\'s
going to have been next
i hope you do a other one
i can\'t waith to see what\'s
going to have been next
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you\'re a very fluffy author. It\'s hilarious. I love it. I\'ve read everything (read it all today, actually) and I just want you to know that I really like it.
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww that was so cute! I loved the end! Sevvie to the rescue! And i LOVED the tickle fight in the dungeons, cute.
Ill be looking for the sequel! - Jessica
Ill be looking for the sequel! - Jessica
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No That Can\'t be the end if it is I will have to KILL you and then you will be stuck with WORMTAIL MWAHAHAHA MWHAHEHEHE
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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve really enjoyed reading this story. It\'s been really enjoyable.
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story has an interesting theme, and carries itself along. It\'s a little jumpy from one scene to the next, but I applaud your efforts.
Do you use a Beta?
Do you use a Beta?
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh nice chapter! Loved it, especially the dream. That was so cute \'I love you little one\' Adorable
please continue soon - Jessica
please continue soon - Jessica