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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t really like that idea for the glamors. I\'m not flaming you I\'m just responding to your request of whether or not you should delete it.
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! It\'s very well written. You should keep the glamour part, after all they were your idea and you shouldn\'t change it just because some people don\'t like it. Keep up the good work!
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the glamour thing, I mean if you work it into the story & explain it some it could work.
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi.....
With the vote thing in the last chapter. I think you should just go with whatever works for the story. In earlyer chaps Harry had no prob with the way Snape looked so i didnt see it as that big a deal, however im not the auther, you are :P If it is going to change the story line then i dont think you should change it, its nice to have Snape as a dead sexie man rather than the dark man with a dead sexie voice which has almost been run through the ground, not that its a bad take on Snape. Anyway that prob didnt help. In other words i think you should keep the story as is, some people may not like it but it will be different.......now im confusing myself.........lol.... anyway love the story. keep it up
Lisa
(P.S if that made no sence then i ment to say keep it as is, its cool. sorry about the rambling)
With the vote thing in the last chapter. I think you should just go with whatever works for the story. In earlyer chaps Harry had no prob with the way Snape looked so i didnt see it as that big a deal, however im not the auther, you are :P If it is going to change the story line then i dont think you should change it, its nice to have Snape as a dead sexie man rather than the dark man with a dead sexie voice which has almost been run through the ground, not that its a bad take on Snape. Anyway that prob didnt help. In other words i think you should keep the story as is, some people may not like it but it will be different.......now im confusing myself.........lol.... anyway love the story. keep it up
Lisa
(P.S if that made no sence then i ment to say keep it as is, its cool. sorry about the rambling)
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Vernon Dursley should get a piece of that wooden paddle, maybe over the head, like \'accidentally\' or something.
Dudley should get something really sadistic, like f____d by Piers, no lube! Piers should get some hurting too.
Petunia should be made to suffer for her Pity of Harry and her lack of action to help him more.
Sorry, hate to be mean, but come on....this is retaliation. An eye for an eye comes to mind.
Love the story continuation. When do more of the Durstrang students play a part. Hey, maybe Harry can befriend them and they\'ll do the nasty stuff with the Dursley\'s. he he he.
Post soon, thanks......MWAH!
Dudley should get something really sadistic, like f____d by Piers, no lube! Piers should get some hurting too.
Petunia should be made to suffer for her Pity of Harry and her lack of action to help him more.
Sorry, hate to be mean, but come on....this is retaliation. An eye for an eye comes to mind.
Love the story continuation. When do more of the Durstrang students play a part. Hey, maybe Harry can befriend them and they\'ll do the nasty stuff with the Dursley\'s. he he he.
Post soon, thanks......MWAH!
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude, I loved the glamor part, you could go many places with it, AND IT\'S YOUR STORY. DO WHATEVER THE HELL THAT YOU WANT WITH IT. Reviews are only suggestions, remember.
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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good and I\'m really looking forward to reading more. You could have the Dursleys cause more trouble. Say Vernon somehow kidnaps Harry and hurts him, but then gets his punishment, preferably from Sev. Get Petunia to meet up with her Daughter. Upto u. Intruiged on what you\'ve got planned.
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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like it! I\'m such a sap for \"poor abused harry fics\", but jessica is such a neat twist on an old theme! And regarding what might happen between harry and snape.... I was thinking maybe there could be the first kiss before the final battle and then it could take the fast lane afterward. I don\'t know...thats why you write em and I read em.
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gosh i love this story keep up the great work and update as soon as possible
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the footsie part, thanks.
Yah, Severus in short hair, uh uh, wouldn\'t work at all, yech!
Went to your site, nice pix. I\'ll watch for more later.
Hmmm, ideas....let me think........
Great work especially on the floo network breakdown, giggle. What a way to get Harry and Severus together, when he\'s sooo hot for Severus, don\'t we all know, lol.
Many confections for you to keep you going.
Yah, Severus in short hair, uh uh, wouldn\'t work at all, yech!
Went to your site, nice pix. I\'ll watch for more later.
Hmmm, ideas....let me think........
Great work especially on the floo network breakdown, giggle. What a way to get Harry and Severus together, when he\'s sooo hot for Severus, don\'t we all know, lol.
Many confections for you to keep you going.