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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well it\'s not that bad. But you only wrote that Sev looks more attractive, you didn\'t wrote how he *really* looks like.
Could you please describe his looks better.
If you do this, than YES keep the chapter!!!! (If you don\'t feel like doing so, than you shoudn\'t keep this chapter.)
Could you please describe his looks better.
If you do this, than YES keep the chapter!!!! (If you don\'t feel like doing so, than you shoudn\'t keep this chapter.)
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I didn\'t like the whole idea about glamours too much, but it\'s your story, not mine.
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I kind of got confused a bit when I read the last chapter about the glamours. Although I was reading it late at night so that could\'ve been the problem lol. This is just my opinion, I love fics that still have that romance element in it but still canon. Therefore I would like it better if Sev look the way he is in the books. I don\'t really mind you keeping the glamours though, it is a good idea. If it fits the story keep it, if it doesn\'t don\'t. As long as you don\'t change the whole fic lol j/k.
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not ure if the glamor thing will work good. But it\'s your story, write it how you see fit
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I haven\'t thought that Sev could have put a glamour to show him ugly, but it\'s a very good idea. I can\'t wait to see the faces of the others. Thanks from Switzerland ; ) Phoenix
I haven\'t thought that Sev could have put a glamour to show him ugly, but it\'s a very good idea. I can\'t wait to see the faces of the others. Thanks from Switzerland ; ) Phoenix
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep the chapter. It was a really good idea to have glamours. Make Snape real cute. The story is really great. Looking forward to reading more.
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep it its intersteing dont make the changes way over the top when you discribe him in later chapters but the galmar thing is cool and diffrent and gives you more to work with wiht sevs charater by makeing him younger
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep that last chapter and update soon.
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like the last chapter it\'s different then others it\'s good. and i like your story
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve read the whole story and I have to say that I like it the way that it\'s going. I like the fact that the glamors are brought into the story. I think that it\'s cool that you have Severus looking better then the way he is seen by the kids at school. I hope that you leave the story the way that it is. That means that there is something that only his sister, Harry and a few others get to see.