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Hey, Jessica,

No problem on the virus thing and the broken fingers....you haven\'t managed to stamp out too many double letters, lol.

Great chapter though, even if it was short. Sometimes, the short ones are so meaningful.

I love how you write Ron, he\'s absolutely laughable and such a cad! Surely he\'ll have some graces or exceptional qualities besides being the brave and fearless Gryffindor or Draco\'s shagging partner.

Thanks for this post, but don\'t leave it too long for the next one. Many chocolate frogs, sugar quills and whatever other sweet thing to you to have you write more and often.

I think your story is cute and your writing is good overall; very descriptive and all that. But- because theres always a but- I think youve been changing too much. I think most people, including me, like the fact that Snape isnt horribly handsome. lol. It just makes you appreciate his sexy voice and brooding personality that much more. As for the rest, I could deal with \'Mione turning bitch because Harry got to keep Ron and gain Draco. The character developments all happened very fast though. However, your story is keeping my interest. Im usually more into the angsty stuff, but your style seems to lean more towards the fluffy side, and thats good too. I see major potential!

*smiles sheepishly* Although, I could be wrong... (mental note: read reviews *before* saying things) :P Oh, well. When writing for fun, do what *you* want. When writing for money, do what the masses want. Keep it up!

Hey i like what you have written so far, the glamour idea was a nice touch very original ! its a keeper!

noo keep it
its totaly you
not like the book
which is what you wanted right
besides
i like this twist
it would be interesting on how everyone else will react
expecially
snapes sis

Wow thank goodness you are keeping that last chapter.. thatt was, as my kids would say, Hell Cool!
you are doing a wonderful job here.. but problem is i need more... and now

I like the last chapter leave it be please
thank
Smilie

Shouldn\'t it be your decision?
It\'s your story. If you think your plot\'s going where you want it to then don\'t change anything!
^^

I totally think you should leave the last chapter in, it\'s a nice twist that i havent seen before and I\'d like to see how it turns out. Just my point of view though!

Well, I kind of like the old snape, it adds to the attraction, if you know what I mean. It just wouldn\'t be the same if Snape didn\'t look the way he always did. however, I\'m so curious as to how he looks now, hopefully not to differnet. Maybe you could make Snape a little hotter than the real one, you know, maybe make the nose a little less prominant, or make his hair silky instead of greasy, small changes but nothing to big. As for a vote, I think you should keep the old Snape or make small changes to satisfy people on both sides.