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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOt a fan of rape stories. And too OOC. I don\'t see Snape as the \"sudden attack\" type. MOre likely he\'d plot out a twisted seduction. You could do a sequel where Harry dreamed it all and then realizes he wants Snape to dominate/force him. Which could make some interesting BDSM. Which for some reason is more appealing to me than rape stories. ;) Not to mention there could be a whole lot of fun in Harry trying to figure out how to get what he wants from Snape. :D
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it!
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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love Sev/Harry stories. It\'s refreshing to see Sev being a bastard from time to time. I like your story. Please update soon.
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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, a very good start to writing. Spelling, grammar is o.k. Story line, should have had some warnings on it, see story codes list, but hey, what are we all doing here anyways?
I don\'t know which way you\'re intending to continue and if you\'ll put any softness into it or not. I\'m thinking no, but it would be so tempting to have Harry want more from a simple gesture of say Severus whispering his name or telling Harry he\'s beautiful or just making the ground soft with moss before banging him in the Dark Forest. You could also develop the lust Severus has for Harry in future chapters.
If you continue on a hard line, you\'ll have to reign in that Gryffindor spirit somehow with some pretty strong blackmail words or something. Maybe doing this is something Severus can do to make Harry stronger in the end, no pun intended, for when he fights Voldemort.....just a thought.
I\'ll look for more.....soon....!!!!
I don\'t know which way you\'re intending to continue and if you\'ll put any softness into it or not. I\'m thinking no, but it would be so tempting to have Harry want more from a simple gesture of say Severus whispering his name or telling Harry he\'s beautiful or just making the ground soft with moss before banging him in the Dark Forest. You could also develop the lust Severus has for Harry in future chapters.
If you continue on a hard line, you\'ll have to reign in that Gryffindor spirit somehow with some pretty strong blackmail words or something. Maybe doing this is something Severus can do to make Harry stronger in the end, no pun intended, for when he fights Voldemort.....just a thought.
I\'ll look for more.....soon....!!!!
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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was good. I think you should continue on with the story and make Harry pregnant. Severus will have t deal with the consequences.
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, I love angst stories, and therefor I love this one! And right now I\'m really curious to see what made Serverous do such a thing 0.o
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is my first review (so I\'m not sure what to say, But I\'ll Try!!!) This looks like it will turn in to a great story, PLEASE continue it!!!!!!!! I Really hope that You will choose not to discontinue it.
AJA
AJA
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t know what to say, really. All that I can say is that I hope that that was perhaps Draco Malfoy using a polyjuice potion, but with how it was written, I doubt it. Severus is my favorite character in the entire Harry Potter series and he\'s been ruined for me in your fic, but I will continue reading despite that in hopes that Severus will manage to redeem himself.