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by arionne

person StapleKitten
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o Holly Twitch. . . I thought it was going to be a Draco/Harry fic. . . I liked it ALOT. . . I wish the sex seens would have been more graphic but you are a pretty good writer. Keep up the work! Good luck and lots of yaoi kisses.
*Peace*Love*Happiness*
person Lily Anne
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That\'s... Actually very cute. I know I\'m supposed to feel angsty after reading this, but really. All I can think of is \"that was so cute!\"
person Angel
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m confused... was it Snape? or Draco? Even if it was confusing it was sooooo sad and great writing.
person Arwen Rayne
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was just about how I see that relationship ending...
person Sabina Jordan
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww...*sniffles* \'twas sad..
i liked it. damn that severus! heh.