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for Inside of me

by Slytheinkitten

person antipyro
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kitten,

So well written, almost just like being there. The angst, the horror, the sex! (Guh) Oh, and I love the way you describe Harry, no more scrawny little boy, but a man, broad chest and strong arms. I swoon...... ......and Harry gets to fuck Severus, not commonly found in these fics.

Bravo and I send your muse many chocolate frogs and gifts of pleasant feelings of lust and love, to inspire your thoughts.


Please post real soon.......and in longer chapters. Many chocolate frogs and HoneyDukes sweets.....
person ~Subdued~Slytherin~
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Unique...Disturbing..Twisted... KEEP GOING!!!
person felmyst
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Start! Keep it Up!
person Morgan
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I beg you to continue, it is far better than most. I would have to say this, simply because I dont\' review on many stories.