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for Dream a little Dream

by eeb

person acr
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A cat? Must say, I\'m a little dissappointed. but I\'m still enjoying the story.
person Tiamat
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story :) Its to bad you didnt invent Harry Potter...Yours tends to be more interesting in the relationship area hehe. You got to admit its sort of sad knowing that JK is going to put Harry with a girl.......Someone needs to show JK the joys of slash/Yaoi :P
person tessa3
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MOI!!!! *crosses arms* well damn!!! why ya gotta stop right htere.. please post another chapter.. puh-lease *gives big puppy eyes*
person acr
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying this story! Your grammar and dialogue are improving as you go along. Please continue!

I would like to see Harry actually DO some stuff. He\'s been sort of passive. I know he\'s the submissive and all, but he\'s also very capable.
person Yana
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aw i hate cliffies
person icestar
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:pokes eeb: cliffie... why a cliffie there. :pouts:

ah well, nice to see an update ^_^ :thumbs up:
person Tamura
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like the title- it fits, especially since if i didn\'t know better, i\'d say harry was in a dream. of course, i do.. but still. please continue
person Iras
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m glad that here, Narcissa is non-existant, she never made an appearance or is MENTIONED except for like on the Black Family Tree, I mean, she is one of the main charachter\'s mothers, even Hermione\'s muggle parents made a mild appearance.

Oh, you have made me now support HarryVoldemort. Congrats! It takes alot to manipulate my thoughts... unless you are Yami Marik... I mean, not only does he have a powerful rod (try not to have a perverted thought over that statement) and sexy-evil voice, but he himself, is psychotic AND hot.

Off topic. Returning. Returned. Lucius and Sevvy, eh? Never really thought about it, but now I will.
person Iras
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU MADE WATER COME OUT OF MY NOSE YOU BLOODY BASTARD!!! (recovers) Like I was saying, Sev had a needle put to his ass!! (snickers) like the crazies... Draco HAD to see this, didn\'t he? Torture Him. I mean, at this very moment, as we type, I am wearing a shirt that says \"I <3 Malfoy\" I mean, how can\'t you, ya know? Volders was laughing during all of this of course
person Iras
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I KNEW Ron and Hermione were sucking face, they say \"just friends\" HA! LIES!!! At least Hermione is nice enough not to say anything, bastard Ron, BURN RONALD BURN!

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