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why for cliff hanger, no fair

I loved it BUT pleas don\'t hurt harry

Sirius\'s cousan
cool chaptr please will the next chapter be out soon

that was so lovely, I hope this is a happy story bye

ooo a snake or human wants Tom to be his, better watch out Harry

AWESOME STORY!!! Now, was that little hiss in the last chaptet Goyle??? Hmm???

Hey loved the update, please update soon!

I think your story concept is interesting. But I think you explain too much away too convienently. You\'ve eliminated most of the angst potential! And how could Voldemort just \"borrow\" Dumbledor\'s wand? That\'s a bit much too swallow. Why wouldn\'t Voldemort have just kidnapped Harry after the T-wizard tournament? Why did he let Sirius stay in Azkaban all those years?

Frankly, it would be better to alter the canon some and be a touch AU than to try to peform these contortions with the canon. For example, maybe Voldemort did kill Harry\'s parents, but maybe he did it b/c they hated vampires for some reason. Or maybe someone played some sort of trick, and he killed them in self-defense.

Please don\'t be offended, if I didn\'t like your story I wouldn\'t bother trying to leave some constructive criticism.

Hello again. I like \"overbearing LV\" but isn\'t Harry awfully accepting about this? I mean, LV has just refuted some of the \"facts\" HP has relied on for the last 5 years. So harry says, \"Oh, that makes sense. Let\'s be friends.\"

I mean, LV has done some REALLY evil stuff! The diary, killed Cedric Diggory, nearly killing Arthur Weasley...Come on, give us some angst!

yes Sirius deserved that
whooo hoo go Harry