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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! You updated! Awesome!
Lovely chapter. I\'m still really curious as to why the girls never go the chance to reveal themselves before this day? It\'s all very interesting at this point, and I\'m dying to see more. Please don\'t leave us in such a lurch again. It was so long before you updated!
Lovely chapter. I\'m still really curious as to why the girls never go the chance to reveal themselves before this day? It\'s all very interesting at this point, and I\'m dying to see more. Please don\'t leave us in such a lurch again. It was so long before you updated!
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this. It\'s really good and developing well. Please keep going. I\'m dying to know what happens next. Hope the potion works! I hope to see an update soon too! @->-- xXx
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its different, its good, don\'t keep us waiting too long, please
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
are you ever going to finish this? I thought it was really inventive when I first read this and I really would like to see you continue this. I think a lot of people would enjoy this story and it\'s driving me insane not knowing the ending and the in between bits. Please Update this. pretty please. Blessed Be,
~Sandra~
~Sandra~
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am really liking how this story is coming along,
but why would Hermione and Ginny want to hide
from Harry and the others? Please continue.
but why would Hermione and Ginny want to hide
from Harry and the others? Please continue.
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is an awesome story. Already so much has been set up, and there\'s so much more to tell. I\'d love to know how Ginny and Draco got together. But the mystery of the future is just as captivating. Please update soon. Can\'t wait to see what happens next.
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good for a 1st fic. Nice lemons by the way, could have been a bit more descriptive; but nice anyway. Few spelling mistakes, pretty good grammar. The one big thing is you should use the editor and fix the 1st chapter so it\'s within the page so you don\'t have to scroll to the side to read it. (don\'t know if that was a problem for anyone else; but it was for me.) Also watch your paragraphs. Other than that, it\'s pretty interesting. Looking forward to seeing more. Hope you go in depth about why the girls ran off! Happy writing.
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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am really geting into your story and am looking forward to an update. I hope this site doesn\'t go down....are you posting on any other site?? Just in case.
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Continue please, otherwise I will just have to withhold the cheesecake. ;)
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, look forward to more.