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I liked the progress in this chapter. Hermione\'s character as a rape victim is comming along very nicely!!
All I could have asked for was...MORE SNAPE!!! hehe Okay Okay I know he didnt fit into that chapter more then he was present...but but lol I love him lol

Well Done darling. I still and will continue to, love this story :-)

Tainted Angel xxx

having the beta has made this much more readable. looking foward to the next update. i like the idea behind this story. yes it is not very original but it is being done well.

better but not very good.
the writing is almost child like.
needs imporvement.

Hello fellow Aussie darling!! :-)

Congrats to you and your new Beta!! Double claps for you! I have enjoyed this chapter alot!! It was also well formatted and I didnt find I was reading the same line over and over (yes I am blonde) lol

Looking foward to seeing what is to come!!

TaintedAngel xxx

ok i like the way your story is going so far, i think you need to update. i like it. but will she tell Ginny, and will Snapes memories be restored? i would like to know. YOU GOT ME THINKING.

i just can;t leave you alone but the fact remains i have reveiwed you work more than anyothers. The beta tester helped alot, i found it much easier to read thank you. not a big problem i am just painfully aware of this, in the 5 update you say pensive and i know what you want i just want to know if you are trying to keep to the harry potter universe specifically? PLease don;t read this as aggrissive just questioning. A pensive is a place to store and veiw memories to the best of my knoledge. if you are not thats fine i thought to just put up my hand and ask.

After reading your update i would like to retract my reveiw above, i am only familiar with the more common method of dealling with it. Please forgive my ignorance but i still wonder while reading she as in myveiw feels no anguish afterwards, she is dead emotioonally in the first chapter and then goes almost back to normal after spending time in her proffesors bed. She obliviates him and then goes on to business as usual. Please don;t take this a destructful critizism, i am just trying to find a rational explanation. Before your update I was not aware of any other way for dealing with rapes or asssults. Again please excuse my reveiw above, i usually don;t reveiw bad i was just i don;t know really how to express it but i could go with confused. Anyway pls update.

AND OH TaintedAngel i read all HG/SS pairings I come across as of in the last month so as in not reading it if i come across it I will read it and I will express myslef good or bad and I frankly don;t care what you think pf people reveiwing. That is the point of reveiwing the good and the bad. If I wrote and i don;t because I do not think up all of these creative plots i would like the peole critizising me because you will never become a good writer if all you read in reveiws is you did a great job.

Lu Ling Qi - Oh dear hunny I did not mean to offend any of the reviewers!! Ofcourse it is everybodys right to review good or bad!! I was not critisizing the reviewers but simply giving support to the author. If you took offence I am deeply sorry but it was not intended that way. Constructive critisism is always important. However simply bagging an author for doing something they love is not acceptable. If you leave a bad review back it up with information so the author can improve. So in short Lu Ling Qi I am sorry if I offended you...and to save this from becomming a discussion board between the two of us perhaps if you have anything to say to me you would like to email me at the above addy or leave a review on one of my stories. Thabnk you hunny!

TaintedAngel xxx

this story needs a beta. formation of paragraphs etc. i think it has promise to be a good story. have you read many hg/ss storys? most people like alot of smut (tip from me to you)
Tainted angel you crazy australian bird! always defending the authors. maybe you should be beta to this story?

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