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for Broken Lives

by AngelsOdyssey

person nutmeg
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, loved that last chapter. Didn\'t think Snape could acually be caring, but it works out really good ^_^

Rock on
person lydia
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is very good. i hope you will up date soon. i really like the way this is going.
person Susan
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a beautiful chapter. Severus was so sweet (a little OOC, but who cares!!). I loved that he gave her back what was stolen, and in return was given that gift. Nice and lemony but still so loving. Glad you are continuing this.
person JTBJAB
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww.....sweet chapter!

Please update soon!
person Susan
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! With the beta work on this story it is really turning into something. I liked it before(needed help on formatting), but now it is very good. I just re-read the whole thing and I like what you have.Keep up the good work. I look forward to more of this...especially how you ended that last chapter with her trying to leave and Snape preventing it. Update soon
person snapesflower
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this fic. Its very good, and a good storyline. Keep writing!
person JTBJAB
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! I need and want more!
person Annoying Nitpicker
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That should be slackass ho. Ho is a contraction of whore. Hoe is a gardening instrument. :-P
person Snapes_lady_in_waiting
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i would have liked more detail and for hermionies feelings to be given in more depth. otherwise I do like this story.

note to tainted angel - girl when are you going to update your stories? slackass hoe =)
person Lu Ling Qi
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi its me again, anyway i wanted to drop a line and say i like how you are progressing the sotry. Keep up the good work and update soon!