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for A Secret Fantasy

by IShantsay

person ChevyBaby
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t believe you left the chapter there... After all that build up. Now i\'m on the edge of my seat waiting and wondering what both Severus and youself think could be so \'squicky\'.
person Anon
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really want to know what this fantasy is. UPDATE!
person cupotrevor
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh please tell us what it is!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Mswigglesworth
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m sorry, but wtf is it already.
person Aunt Bijou
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaauuuggghhhh!!!! He wants to what?? What??? What does he want to do??? You can\'t stop there!!! AAaaauuuggghhh!!! My brain! My brain is leaking out my ears!!!
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EVIL!!! How could you leave us with a cliff hanger like that! You have to update soon! I have to know what his fantasy is!

Tiffany
person Aileen
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your and evil evil author, you do realize this don\'t you??? lol

leadin up to it the whole chapter and then bam........hell of a cliffy, i have to hand it to you......lol that was just down right nasty......lol good job...way to hook your readers!!! lol

i look forward to your next chapter!!

Aileen
person stormi
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'ve got to be kidding me! What a place to leave off. More soon! Please.
person mysticsong1978
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What an awful cliffy! Though I suspect I know where his thoughts are going. Looking forward to the next chapter(s)!!
person Jill
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so evil. we read forever and then you dont even finish. You need to finish that. It would be stupid without an ending.