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for A Secret Fantasy

by IShantsay

person cd
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ehm...should have been \"theoretically sanitary\" i guess. it\'s been a while since i\'ve freshened up my english. but really, after reading your other reviews, even i thought it would have been something worse. i guess on some level, i would have even understood psychologically why one would want to do a child (since she isn\'t really a child now, you could not talk about mental abuse or something). well, bye again
person venomequeen_83
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.........Thats just crule. UPDATE! Good work btw.
person anyah_daoc
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well???!!!! Don\'t just leave us poor readers hanging hon...
person Anon
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
..... ok, there was no way on this earth i would of guessed that
person Anon
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooh!!! grrr! Damnit, you MUST update, and SOON! That isn\'t even a cliffie, thats a... a..... a \'reaching out to grab an apple off the tree, but the fence holds you back, and it\'s so close you can taste it, but you CAN\'T. Please, have pity- update soon! :(
person teacherspet
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have an idea of whats coming next and I hope you tell us why that turns him on. Oh and 50 points to your house for the excellent cliffy!
person The Blackheart
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please update, please please please please please please update. Please.
person wow
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well you promised squick and I was expecting a lot of things, but not that. Still I like the idea. Great story your really creative. Update soon!!!!!!!!!
person SeveressaSnape
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally!! Somebody that realizes there are just as many nerve endings \"through the back door\" that enjoy being stimulated as there are anywhere else! While this idea is not spoken about much, God gave us a playground to play in with lots of different toys; (our bodies and bits). We would be very remiss to not explore every one.... You gave plenty of warning and you are writing your story very realistically as far as character is concerned. Keep up the good work.
person Ms Severus Snape
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update!!! Anticipation is running high I want to know!!! I think I have a pretty good idea of what his fantasy is going to be but I can\'t wait to find out for sure. Please update soon!!!