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Pleaseeeeee update!

Well, his fantasy was not quite what I thought it was going to be but I was close, I figured it would be a, what did you call it, a \"water sport\"? I have never heard that expression, but I have heard of the fetish in my Human Sexuality class at Uni. Anyway, I am open-minded and still willing to read. Update soon please!!

Evil cliffy....

Ch 2 - doesn\'t sound that bad, especially if they\'re in the shower. \"Bad\" would if he wanted to urinate in her mouth and have her swallow his urine, or ejaculate in her eyeballs, or something like that. Go ahead and write the third chapter.

*smirk* Is that all....Jeez, with the way you were carrying on I thought he wanted something MUCH worse, I think Hermione handled the situation quite well, it is quite an unusual kink but not nearly as out there as some and I think it is quite sweet of her to be willing to accomodate him.

While I doubt that the subject matter will ever excite me, it does look to be an interesting interaction between the two of them. And not too squicky after all... if I were Hermione I\'d be more worried about bursting out laughing than about running away in horror.

That was mean. You cannot promise me a squick and then not deliver.

go on. continue. well i like it, though the idea is new to me. sounds strange, but it is interresting and the \"theoretically unsanitary\" aspect seems like a very good point. i hope to read the next chapter soon. :) goodbye

Oh man you have to update this! And I have my suspicions on what he wants....but incase i am wrong i will not say.

This is brilliant! Please update soon!

Of course you should finish it! The thing I hate most in fanfic isn\'t bad writing, songfics, or authors who appear to place their punctuation with a oujie board- it\'s unfinished fics. It vexes me greatly! So, please, please finish it. I really like how sensitively you\'ve dealt with the characters and their relationship- you\'re a good writer (wish I knew what your usual plume was- I\'d love to read your other stuff.)
Though I have nothing against watersports, I\'m not particularly into them either. But I Really want to see H and S do the deed (and the fantasty)- proof enough for me that what makes someone or something sexy is the desire- and the trust- between said persons. The fact that Severus desires this so much that he will trust Hermione and tell her, and the trust she has in his kindness to her, and the trust that she holds that she doen\'t want to hurt him..... I think I lost the train of my thought there. But, the desire and trust you show between these two really makes me want to see the end. Hope you update soon :)