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for A Secret Fantasy

by IShantsay

person Lisa
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well, that was different. i really didn\'t know what to expect, but that caught me off guard. keep going. i wanna keep reading it.
person Anon
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You write well; please share the rest.
person Kerri-Lynn
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok I have to say-I Love It!!!! So kinky yet so exciting. Please, please write more. I can\'t wait to see what happens. Great job!!!
person Someone Out There
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not what I was expecting! What I imagined it to be did have an anal bent, but not a urinanal bent. Or is that urinal? HA! I was thinking he was wanting to try prostate massage, or analingus. Well done, in any case!
person Maudie
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey this was really different and new. I really hope you continue cause I want to see \"it\" happen. I think it\'s great when lovers trust each other with their secret fantasies.

Please continue. Please? LOL
person indierocket
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the first story I\'ve ever reviewed on AFF... I liked it. I\'m not interested in \'watersports\', as you say, but the way he felt and how she reacted turned me on. I liked it.
person Lisa
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool honey!!!! Please continue. This is one of the most interesting stories I\'ve read.

Thanks-and please write more chapters. I want to see what happens!!!
person Laura
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH! Update soon! How can you tell us it\'s squicky and then stop there??!? Damn you!
person wolfen
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
write it. I\'ll read it.
person jilly
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
need to know!