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for A Secret Fantasy

by IShantsay

person akasha
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well, it is a very interesting PWP ficlet, but you should always finish what you start! besides, it\'s not UTTERLY repulsive, but strange indeed.
person totallylost
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
go for it! i would be instering to read probly close to rice\'s buety triolgy
person Sami
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AARRGH!!!!!!!!!

how mean to leave it like that
person dragon 34
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i would like to read a third chapter. when i read the first i thought he wanted something illegal, like him wanting to do a child, i was relieved when he said urinating. you really had me worried.
person Lightningbook
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wrote one I gave warning on too so Isay go for it!

bzme.theaquaria.net/Scully
person thursday
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting. May i ask where you got the idea for this particular fantasy?
person JTBJAB
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not quite what I thought it was going to be.....but I started this with an open mind and I continue to read with an open mind. Please continue to write this....and if anyone dares to flame you, then ignore them...you gave the warnings, they are only flaming because they are spiteful and are doing it for the sake of doing it! So don\'t be disheartened....I will read whatever you have written in the next chapter/will write.
person Anon
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
don\'t even think about leaving us like that. Update soon
person Sandy
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked the fact you put a warning on your story. It is extremly well written and I\'m curious for more. Besides, considering some of the truly bizarre things I\'ve read on the net, your\'s is more along the lines of creative kink :) Well written and a bit naughty, the best kind. I hope you continue on this story..


Sandy
person catpower
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AaaaaH! I\'m now desperate to know what it is! How could you leave it at that? You MUST write the next chapter to put me out of my misery. What is IT?