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for A Secret Fantasy

by IShantsay

person TaintedAngel
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well....ummmm...I must say! I have never....or heard...or been asked....oh my!!
Very interesting!! :-)
Glad that you have added something new to a HG/SS story :-)
Kinky Mr Severus!!

TaintedAngel xxx
person JW
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 3 - I think the nicest part about this fic is that both Severus and Hermione are accepting of each other\'s thoughts and fantasies. They don\'t demand that the other accede to their wishes; they just ask nicely. The acceptance part is perhaps the nicest thing about being loved.
person gina
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you actually handled that very well. wen i realised wat the fantasy was i was a bit hesitant to read on but honestly it wasnt as bad as i expected. well done
person ladydeathfaerie
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i found this to be terribly interesting. and, while the
fetish isn\'t mine, the idea of it was somehow arousing.

it was not written in poor taste. it was not written to be
purposely degrading. it was simply written to be. and it
was done very well.

i enjoyed it and would love to read further works.
any of it.

if you wish, you can email me privately and let me know
what i\'m looking for.

i promise your secret identity is safe with me.

~blessings~
ldf
person wolfen
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read it. And, I liked it. It\'s not something that I would have ever thought of, but as far a squicky sex goes, I have to admit it wasn\'t that unfathomable to me. And like you, I think I could be talked into it by Snape :)>
You did a great job on this.
Cheers,
wolfen
person anon
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok I\'ll review some other fic instead.
;-)
person Stratyllis
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
On the squick scale from 1-10 1 being low, this gets about a 3. Not very squicky, quite hot though.
person nesscafe
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh well that\'s not too awful... Or maybe I\'m just a kinky chic... As a married woman, I live by \"never say never\" till you\'ve really thought about it. I\'ve done lots of things I never imagined I\'d enjoy or have done, so... I would like to have you finish this! What can I say the perv in me needs the smut!
person Sabra Lane
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I\'m still here and reading...
Update ?
person lydia
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
why not continue. it is an interesting read.