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for A Secret Fantasy

by IShantsay

person dragon34
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
although sounded real kinky, it would definately be to sick to try. i work in a nursing home, i deal with urinary tract infections, yeast infections, and c-diff almost on a daily basis, i\'d be too scared of getting anything like that, so i\'ll just continue to read stories like yours.
person Shan\'t say either
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Feeeeelthy! Teehee. Just fascinating to my voyeuristic nature - I wonder if it is really possible and if the pee wouldn\'t all flood out backwards whilst the man was still inside in an unpleasant manner. After all, the bowel isn\'t really meant to hold all that liquid - especially after being loosened and pounded!
Euww! I\'ve just made it even worse now, haven\'t I?
person Bastet H Meresger
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my but that was lovely!!! i didn\'t think it was that bad of a kink to have... i\'ve read stranger kinks in the harry potter fandom ^_^
person bunny_wigglesworth
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know what... damnit... I liked it. It was an interesting topic handled with a delicate touch. It\'s always nice to see two lovers that can trust eachother no matter what their little kinks are. It was nice to see such a thing in a well written story. btw... not much on the squick level really... I have certainly read worse... hell... I\'ve probably done worse. thank so much for sharing this. And just so you know... I rarely leave reviews on this site, but I wanted to encourage you for being bold enough to put this out there (even if you did do it and a different name) and I really hate to be the one to break your 69 in the reviews, but I had to say something... just my $.02 anyway. -bw
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really rather interesting. It is not something that I had ever considered and I do not think that I could do it, unless Alan Rickman asked me to because I would do ANYTHING for him, but I have done a lot of things that people would think was off colour so to each their own.

I loved the story for its originality and for the fact that it was really well written. I have a big pet peeve for authors with poor grammer or poor writing skills so when I come across an author who is talented it makes me want to continue reading all the more.

I would be interested in knowing your actual pen name so that I could read your other works. I promise not to divulge your identity. :)

Cheers!
person Silver
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eeeem...not really what I thought it was going top be, but the story was well writen on all things. I hope you write anotehr story, I would like to see what you come up with.
person droxy
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A lot of people were talking about this on WIKTT chat. Said I had to read it. Events aside, I like the maturity of the relationship between SS and HG. Nicely written.
person Anna
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not silly and won\'t be forgotten. This was one of the most sexiest, different in a good way stories that I have read. I\'m so glad you decided to write it.

I\'m printing it out so I can keep it.

Lots of roses for this one!
person Anon
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Grateful for the originality...
person JTBJAB
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You want to know why you got so many reviews....simple.... your story is well written and orginal!

It has also been an education - for me anyway - and ironically on tv last night with \'Rescue me\'....well lets just say there was a mention of watersports and it was nice to know what the hell they were talking about!

Thank you for being brave enough to step out of the box to write this! Ahh the odities *sigh*