rate_review Reviews

very nice and very tastefully done.

I think that you did a very good job in what you set out to do (as per your a/n). It is an interesting story, with character, and treats a fetish with understanding and dignity. I thought it a good read.

Good job!

While, like the author, it\'s not something I would probably try, I found this to be a well written and intriguing story. Just because it\'s not my particular kink doesn\'t mean there\'s anything wrong with it. And it was definitely not the average run-of-the-mill been-done-to-death-twice SS/HG story. That alone gives it a certain merit. Kudos to the author, whoever they may be.

This story was discussed on a yahoo group and it piqued my curiosity as to what all the hush-hush was about. But I must say, you wrote a truthful account of how one might end up doing some fetish they have never thought about. I have never heard of such a thing before, but it is a credit to your writing ability that not only did it almost seem like something that might occur in any bedroom, but you have people talking about your writing, which is something we all want as writers. So kudos for being brave!

This is quite an interesting fic. Nevere heard of anything like that but it is very intriging.

I think you are being a bit to hard on yourself. Firstly because--while I find the subject a bit odd--as a fetish, I really don\'t find it all that squicky. As you showed in the story, there is nothing about the act that is unsanitary and the way it was handled in the shower, etc, it wasn\'t even messy. In a fanfic world, where there are a plethora of sexual tales which involve rape, torture, and blood sports, a little water sport seems terribly tame. It hurts no one. The second, and I think more important thing I\'d like to say is that I enjoyed very much the way you handled the whole subject of two people, in a loving relationship, being both interested and non-judgmental about each other\'s fantasies. No one has to do an act that they are truly uncomfortable with, but to act like Ron did and make a loved one feel they cannot even be honest about their desires is unpardonable. You showed the difference between Hermione\'s honest consideration of the idea and Ron\'s making his partner feel like they were disgusting, and you illustrated the point elegantly and well. You should not be ashamed to put your name to this fic; you did a great job with a difficult subject.

I want to tell you how much I loved this story. You presented a very realistic picture of a conversation between a couple about sexual experimentation and you have succeeded in taking a potentially squicky subject and turned it into something highly erotic.

I couldn\'t help but notice the wonderful plug you gave to the Sycophant Hex archives. Thank you! Now would you please consider posting this at Ashwinder?

I loved this story. It was well written and covered in a very delicate manner showing the trust that there should be between significant others to tell on another what is on our minds. This story has brought new ideas to both myself and my significant other as she is the one that brought this to me. I am so glad she did and I am so glad that you finished the story. If I had seen this before you were finished I would have been one to have prompted you as well. Thank you. Thank you.

jolly good fic

technical urine is only steril in teh ureters of teh kidneys. once it hits teh bladder it hits teh bacteria that have gotten up throught the urethra. i am taking micobiology for nurses and we\'re studying urinary tract infections. but it\'s what most people believe, and the thing is guys have more pipework so they get less infections. since the bacteria that cause uti\'s comes ussually from the natural flora in your intestinal tract which xists throught the rectum, for the story she wouldn\'t likely get an infection. you probably didn\'t need or want the micro lecture but there ya go