rate_review Reviews

the fight scene wasn\'t bad. could maybe stand a little input from the teachers and the deatheaters, or at least voldemort telling his deatheaters not to interfere or some such, but overall not a bad one. keep up the great writing, and can\'t wait to find out what happens next.

Im happy to hear it\'s far from over:D. The battle scene was really good but I would\'ve gone a bit more into detail with it. *shrugs* no matter, it was still a really good chapter and there\'s no reason for you to be nervous!!!

*hugs author* thanks for updating!!!

No....dont rewrite it. I think that it is great and very interesting even thought the fight between harry and vodi could be more detailed but it is ok for me!
But it is sure is sad that lucius have to die as hey he finally turned good!
But overall i say that this is great update soon

bye

The battle scene is good actually. The entire chapter was interesting too. It\'s cool how they were taken to Hogsmede and then got to walk away from the other for a while. There was a good use of descriptions from each POV too about the battle scene which was cool. Keep up the good work. Update soon? Please?
~Neko~

Good chapter. Voldy is dead and Draco and Harry care about eachother!
COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!
To bad about Luscious really...

hello
I am not 12- ams 23. i really like the idea of the story. i think that while the being force together might have accelerated there willingess to be intimate,. i think the confrontatiion was rush. partialy buase i would have like more of the story. is there any was you could see to making this an mpreg due to the strength of the bonding? think it should be harry that has the baby.

I really don\'t think this (Chap !!) was your best. Don\'t get me wrong, I really enjoyed the holding hands, the shopping, the head pain, that was all great. But you lost me when Voldie came along. It didn\'t really make sence to me and it didn\'t seem approprete. I think you be better off revising this chapter and holding off on Harry and Draco confronting Tommy for a few more chapters. Get in the Bathtube and the Lapdance scene first.*eyes filled with yearning* I understand that this was your first atempt at a battle scene so I won\'t hold it against you. In the future will we get a Dark Harry, no pressure, but I do wonder.

this chappie was good, and the battle scene was fine. you pulled it off beautifully. i loved how draco was al worried. and i liked how harry couldn\'t exactly remember anything. it was realistic and you have no reason to be nervous about it. this chapter answered some of my questions about the bond. maybe theyll both be able to do what they want, now!
in response to you question about dom/sub relations:
that quote, and your analysis of it is for the most part right. i am the submissive one in my relationship. and yes, i do trust my boyfriend. the power is an illusion. the truth is, that he knows if he did something that i truly didn\'t want him to do, he\'d be on his back saying \'uncle\' in 3 seconds flat... yeah... i can be a little rough for a girl sometimes. if i didn\'t truly WANT to be the submissive, he wouldn\'t hold any power over me, simply because i wouldn\'t let him. and the fact that i can\'t picure myself on top of anyone with a whip. the idea of me controlling someone, versus someone comtrolling me during... intimate times... kinda grosses me out. i duno why, i guess i\'m just programmed that way. and for all the people that thing dom/seb relationships are \'wrong\' or \'gross\' or \'unethical\'... well, you can kiss my lily-white ass.
i hope that answered some of your questions.

i am here to complain on behalf of twelve year olds anonamous about the content of this story and it\'s effects on our naive you minds . . . well actually i\'m not, but i was very amused by that earlier review and couldn\'t help myself . . . i like your story, it is written particularly well, and has the bonus of a decent plot . . . kepp up the good work . . . sorry for the begining of the review, i plead random insanity. L.

This is probably one of the best stories i have ever read, you need to continue this, i will be waiting, i see nothing wrong, and i agree with all you points of veiw on the characters. No suggestions at this point, but i think draco would be a better topper.....oh well, can\'t wait for the next chappie!!!