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by ladyblaze2511

person darknessmiko
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD Draco is knida girly...XD Why does he act like a girl with the shopping and decorating? That was evil how they acted towards Dumbledore~~~~~YAY! I hope you update soon. And keep writing, this is a very good story.

Laika de Linocourt...always and forever Darknessmiko
person makun
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey im here! lol. wow this was so cool and good and i cannot wait for another. I guess you could have done the whole polyjuice thing and it not have been the actual lucius or something i think is what i read you say or something, but i love the idea of decorating! and that whole embarrasing thing with draco was adorable and i hope you update soon!
person Mel
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello! Good chapter! Love the story. MEl
person Remus\'s Girl
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please bring Lucious back, he was both likable and he was not horribly ooc, this is not seen to much and to lose a loved one near a holiday is horrible, even if it is only in a story i hate to see it happen. I now how it feels so please pleaseplease bring him back.

I do love this story and look forward to reading more.
person Fefs
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought i was being smart... I refused to read some chapters just so i could read them all at once, you know? Just for the pleasure to know that i would have more then one chappie to read.. But then i saw you were sad cause you had no reviews for the batlle chapter. I\'m sorry! I love the batlle! You wrote it with the three more important things: Really powerfull Harry, a dead Voldemort, lots of lights... I loved!
About this chapter.. I liked the possibility of Lucius being alive cause this is one fic i like him so.. well it would be great if he was alive! And this protecting harry and needy Draco is so cute! Please update soon, ok? I want to read more about their relationship getting stronger! Do they love each other already? Hugs!!
person sallie
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
person Lady X
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooohh i LOVE this story. The final battle scene was great you dont need to re-do it at all. In fact i think if you everyone will end up disappointed. At least i know i would. For me first instinct is always best when it comes to writing. If it wouldnt be too much toble ofr you i would like to be e-mailed when you update. I would greatly apreciate it. And personally i dont think you should bring Lucius back even though i loved him in this fic. It would just be WAY to soap opera-ish.
lotsa luv
Lady X
person CrAzEe_E_GrEeN
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice little bath scence. lucius should live. yes yes yes. good chapter. i always say the same thing. i dunno..

e.green
person Phoenix Black
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I think you should do the soap opera thing. I like the idea of the Polyjuice situation, like there being another \'traitor\' that was willing to die for Lucius.

ANyway... update soon!
person Deathinapinkboa
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Much better than the last chappie. Keep it going girl(or guy, or trannie)