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for Forced Bonding

by ladyblaze2511

person fefs
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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person kingslady
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story.
person Hazel
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, up until this last chapter I really enjoyed your fic, but what was up with that? If you\'re planning on having Harry dom, then let him freaking dom. If you want Draco to dom, then don\'t say it\'s going to be Harry. I like BDSM fics, or even dom/sub, but I cannot stand how you seem to be flip flopping all the time. I\'m not trying to flame or offend you, and I apologize if you get the wrong impression. I just don\'t understand why you were having such a large dilemma in earlier chapters about the dominant/submissive issue if you are not even planning to use the theory in your fic. Personally, I prefer dominant!Harry, and that\'s what I thought I would be reading in \'Forced Bonding\', because I went ahead and read your author\'s notes before I read the fic to see if it was one I would enjoy. That\'s what I preceived you to be writing, but in the last chapter especially, you seemed to completely go back on that. I really enjoy the plot of the fic and you write very cohesively, but you need to choose a style and stick with it.

~Hazel
person unnie
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh god, i love your story. i could not stop reading it till the last chapter you posted. i hope you add more cause i would love to what happens next.
person Bubbles00
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey it\'s Bubbles00 from Forever Fandom! How come you don\'t like mpreg? Actually, it is kind of weird isn\'t it? lol
I haven\'t really got any ideas for this fic. Well I have, but I\'m using them for my own! Anyway, good chappie. In my eyes Draco is
dominant, he has a naturally controlling nature, but I like your Draco anyway!


Bubbles00
person fragonknight01
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ideas huh? What about Ron walking in and catching Draco and Harry playing an S&M game and thinks that Draco is hurting Harry so he incapacitates Draco and runs away with Harry. Harry tries to protest and explain but Ron goes mental on him... Or, you can have Hermione scheming to infiltrate the Malfoy/Potter bed in order to secure a powerful child...at which point the boys figure out that someone used polyjuice and is now carrying a child to powerful for the mothers magic to support? Oh, bugger...just any old think...please keep writing?
Arwen Rayne
person trixrstrange
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am not always for mpreg (though I\'ve done it in RP) but in this case I think in the end it will make everyone happier. I\'m glad to see that Draco was kept in character for a majority of the start of the fic and is becoming more \'girly\' but we all under go change within a relationship. No matter how large or small the relationship is. Can\'t wait to read more of this brilliant FF and if I don\'t review in the future it\'s because I usually end up reading FF from a sidekick (you know that handy little device from t-mobile) while it gives net access, it doesn\'t leave a way to review a FF. Oh, and as Ron/Mione is my ULTIMATE favorite ship, if you could eventually have them engaged and/or preg, that\'d be GREAT!!

Love, hugs and Bludgers,

Trix ^_^
person ura
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sounds very similar to the story Bound! also posted here.
person kvk
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love girly and bottom Draco ;)
person Remi
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is totally in my top 5 stories! you rock my pants! this is fucking fanastic! great job