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for Forced Bonding

by ladyblaze2511

person Gaia173
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey, about the dom/sub thing, well i read somewhere that the sub basically has all the power. the dom has the illusion of power but for the most part if the sub says "stop" (and actually means it), then everything stops. i have never been in such a relathionship myself but i do find the dynamics interesting. i might be wrong of course (just because it has never happened yet doesn't mean it can't), but it makes sense that the sub leads the relationship (just in a subtle way).
Gaia
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes to siruis picture! that would be awsome! man i dunno what to think about Dumbledore and the bond, would make sense why he wanted the boys to stay at the castle. Hmm... loving the story :)
person Anon
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know it has been a while since that person wrote that horrible review, but i just started reading your story and i love it. That person should take a chill pill and realize that you are doing this for no reason, and are not getting anything out of this. If this were your job I would have no problem with some constructive critisim, however, their review was very harsh and unfounded. I am sorry on their behalf.
person ZooArmy
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hihi! I finally found time to read the last nine chapters. Gods, you shocked me so much when Draco suddenly decided to play an idiot. *sigh* fortunately it went over quickly. *phew*.
I hope you'll update soon.
I like your story and agree with you a lot about flamers - 'if you don't like- don't read.' it's their own fault so.
person Sheree
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would. They should kill Dumbledore and just bury his body or give it to Aragog's family. (Well that is one way of getting rid of it, lol) What a bastard! What does he think he's going to do with it? Become the next Voldemort?
person Sheree
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea of putting Sirius' portrait up where Mrs. Black's used to be. Maybe he and Lucius can get into some good arguments. They can visit each other's pictures. They would be really funny.
After reading the last few chapters it is my conclusion that Draco is getting a little too dominate. :) Don't take this as a flame because it's not but I love domHarry/subDraco or for them to alternate and it seems to me that if the bond recognizes Harry as the dominate Draco wouldn't be topping so much. Just for the sake of argument (I've been reading some of the reviews) I disagree with the ones who think that Harry would be submissive or more willing to be submissive. He's been downtrodden by the Dursleys the majority of his life and has Dumbledore constantly making decisions about him without consulting him so I think he would be less likely relinquish control over his body to someone else. Also, even though you've made Lucius a more loving father than he is normally portrayed (he's very cold in the books too)he seems to want to control his son more than the average father would so Draco would be more likely to be less dominate to someone who has authority over him. Harry, as the dom in their bond, would definitely be in the more authoritative position.
Can't wait for next chapter.
person Jan
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the idea of Sirius portrait to be where his hateful mother use to be. Love this story so far by the way. Please update chapter 20 soon. :D
person ZooArmy
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gods, you don't know what you do to me. I only found your story and I couldn't stop reading last night. Always telling myself 'just one more chapter - just one more chapter'
In the end I read the first ten and wanted to hit myself, because I needed to get up real soon this morning and felt like dying, because I read until late at night.
Doesn't show you how amazed I am by this story? But, I've no time now, need to read the rest!!! (^_^)
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! I also think it would be poetic justice to put Sirius portrait up in Mrs Blacks place!! =D Please update again soon.
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 20! Great idea about putting Sirius' portrait where his mother's used to be! Dumbledore knows doesn't he?