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for Forced Bonding

by ladyblaze2511

person Argo
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
They should have sex in front of Dumbledore during ritual? It most pervert-ish way of performing of binding ritual, which I read till now. Will there be a some screen or curtain to give them a hint of privacy, at least?
I hope, Dumbledore will not have this damn twinkle of his in his eyes after that, else I will want to strangle him even more.
/ Sighs/ My nerves are too delicate for such strong emotions.
Good history for now, though.
Though ritual and its consequences in both boy\'s life is really cruel and unfair.
Oh, I think, it\'s why your story so well fits for its title: It\'s really * forced * binding. :)
Err, I * had * said, I want Harry in husband\'s role, had I? I mean, in dom role it is, it\'s just naturally for protector and carekeeper to have the dominant role in relationships. And Draco needs in some care and solace. He lost his father as paragon and as one person to turn for support, and he will need someone to turn to. Harry can be this one, but he must have dominant role to have calming and protective influence on Draco\'s feelings.
person Phoenix Black
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Too lazy to log in. LoL. Great chapter! I loved the \'keeping it in the family\' line! So great! Update soon!
person Fefs
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aimmm, this fic is even better then the other!! This chappie was so perfect! I can\'t wait to read about them getting to love each other! That part of Draco getting turned on was so cool! Poor thing.. he\'s bottom virgin.. Are you sure you are not going to write the Nc-17 part? You were so talented on the other fic... =P
Please update soon, ok? I love this fic! Hugs!
person keladry
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please please make harry the sub! i always picture draco as bigger and more forceful. therefor he should be the dominant and pound harry into the floor, i love this story so far it is awsome, do you have an update list?? if you do please add me.
update soon
xoxoxox
KEL
person Acacia
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like how Draco & Harry are interacting. Slowly coming to grips with being bonded together, not suddenly confessing their love. It\'s also good that they are able to talk to each other frankly.
person eve/roarke
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Do fanfic writer\'s go to a special school to learn when to finish the chapter which will leave the readers
hurting more.

You really have to update soon, come on, their going to Dumbledore, Draco and Harry meet for the first
time since knowing they have to be bonded. Please, see I\'m not proud I\'ll beg. Update soon.

person pinktarg
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My vote is for Dom! Harry.
person canttalktostrangers
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dom!harry and sub!draco po favo! sweet ficcy, please update soon! ^.^
person Anon
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
my vote is for equality, but the way the bond was described it sounds as if it\'s already set to Draco being the lesser one in the relationship...
person mechee
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Even though this chapter was all chit chat i feel it was important to your story. In bonding stories I feel the one needing the help should be the sub one and the one giving the help should be dom, if the bond is for a short time. Its really up to you if they are going to always be together they should share the joy of being dom.