rate_review Reviews

i think this story is just fine
i have read a lot of stories
and i\'m not 12
so don\'t listen to that girl
she didn\'t call herself a whore for nothing
just keep writing
you\'ll improve
hope you update soon

Hey there i am a little sad that de chap was so short i was expecting a longer one!!! But hey to me ur grammer is okay compare to others that i have read before!!!
In regards to that hurtful review.........ignore that ***** I personally think that your fic is great and i love it!![from de bottom of me heart]
So i hope that you would update soon with a longer chapter!!!

And again....i love this fic so dont give up!!!

ja ne

i will check your grammer for you. There are just a few mistakes but it isn\'t anything that is too bad. It looks like you may have pushed the wrong button when typing everyone does that so dont worry. I know after you have typed and read and re-read a story of your own you get tired and may not realise small mistakes but i think you are doing a wonder ful job please dont let anyone tell you different I am not 12 and have not been for a long time, I enjoy your story and i will be reading the other one you have also Please Keep going for your fans that love your writting dont let one sorry ass person ruin things for you. If you ever need any help I sure will give it to you just e-mail me ok

Great story. Don\'t let anyone stop you! I love that you regularly update, and I can certainly live with the very small amount of grammer mistakes. Keep up the good work!

I think your story is really good so far, and I can\'t wait for more.

I have to make this a quickie, but, nice little set up. I wonder what this chess game will bring out..and as for the mean person, forget them, remember the fans that do appreciate you! keep writing!

e.green

Okay, first of all, though your story premise isn\'t original, it has a lot of good elements that I haven\'t read before. I was really ecstatic when Dobby\'s speech was 97% correct; too many writers make him use \'I\' and \'you\' when house elves don\'t (good job!). I really enjoy reading this story, and you aren\'t a bad writer; I\'ve seen some horrible writers (trust me). You could use improvement on spelling and grammar, but so far, you\'re doing good. Just ignore those ridiculous flames. I\'d pose the challenge of asking them if THEY could do better. It takes guts to put your work out there. Keep it up! Update ASAP!

I really like the way this story is going, Dumbledore did the right thing, chuck them into a room and let them take all
the resentment and anger out on each other.

Read your comments about Dumbledore, I agree that he has kept to much from Harry, but, the rest he needed to do
someone\'s got to make the hard decisions, he\'s hurt Harry, let him get into all kinds problems that a kid his age should
even no about, however Harry needs to learn to fight, he needs to be prepared for the final battle. He acted like a idiot
over the occulmancy, he should have battled down and learnt then Sirius would still be alive.

Dumbledore makes the books, personally think he\'s nuts but there\'s a thin line between insanity or genius.

Harry definately dom. Update soon please.

ok... i feel the need to defend your fic. fan fic whore. that\'s a nice name, huh? (note the sarcasm) well, they should know that your reviewers do not pity you. if i thought your writing was shit, believe me, i would DEFINATELY tell you. i\'m not that nice. and i would also like to state that i am definately NOT 12 years old. you\'re right, if there is a 12 year old reading this, they should stop now. when i was 12 i didn\'t even know what fanfiction was, let alone go reading R or NC-17 stuff. i think that reviewer was rude and it was uncalled for. if they don\'t like the story then click the back button. that\'s what it\'s there for, dumbass. please don\'t let one reviewer ruin your day. just think about all the people *cough*me*cough* that love your story. evreyday when i get online i come here to see if you\'ve updated one of your stories. so please, please ignore this jackass. has it ever occured to you, what a story that they wrote would be like? seems to me that fanfic whore is too scared to leave a signed review. well she can just piss off.
ok, i just had to say that. flamers erk me.
i love this story, and think that it is progressing beautifully. maybe we\'ll get some action soon? *winkwink* glad that the boys got a day off, we get to the juice part sooner! update soon, can\'t wait for more!
wow... i just realised that i went on a rant... i\'ll shutup now.
~moi

Hei, let\'s talk about reviews.

I am a fanfic writer, I got couple ones out there, I\'m not the best one and my grammar could use some improving and also, I am... well, far from 12 years old, but for all that counts I LIKE YOUR FIC and just for the record NO WAY IN HELL I PITY YOU.

So, ok, maybe you don\'t use the words I would use and maybe you just don\'t construct your fic the way I do mine, SO WHAT? It is YOUR fic and the important thing is that you are writing. It\'s you expressing your idea and it\'s great! Botton line: Don\'t let one review you got from someone with more personal problems than personality put you down.

Oh, and btw just in case you were serious about getting someone to review the grammar for you: the only reason I don\'t offer myself to do it is because my grammar sucks big time.

Now that I said all that... when do we get an up date? : )