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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!!!!! ^_^
please update
please update
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I CAN\'T believe that reviewer. What the hell would make her/him leave a review like that?! This is a really good fic *and I\'ve read quite a lot of fics so I have stuff to compare it with* and I AM NOT TWELVE!
On another note, I can\'t wait for the bonding! It\'s going to be so funny and awkward for a bit. Personally, I think Dumbledore should be more embaressed than them afterwards. Like, hearing the noises and everything lol. Also, you might want to try joining a couple od the words together. Like \'I am\' would become \'I\'m\' or \'that is\' become \'that\'s\'. Anyway, can\'t wait til you update again! and ignore reviewers like that. They have no lives if they read that far into a fic just to review and say how much it sucks.
On another note, I can\'t wait for the bonding! It\'s going to be so funny and awkward for a bit. Personally, I think Dumbledore should be more embaressed than them afterwards. Like, hearing the noises and everything lol. Also, you might want to try joining a couple od the words together. Like \'I am\' would become \'I\'m\' or \'that is\' become \'that\'s\'. Anyway, can\'t wait til you update again! and ignore reviewers like that. They have no lives if they read that far into a fic just to review and say how much it sucks.
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I Like it. I really do. The only thing I find disturbing is the whole Dumbledore watching thing. Is there now way around?
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Again, too lazy to log in. LoL. That reviewer was full of shit. You are a great writer and this story is . . . damn, I can\'t even describe it it\'s that good! I\'d be happy to do the spelling and grammar checks if you still need someone. I\'m a perfectionist when it comes to writing, but I\'m not an expert. Let me know!
Update soon!
Blessed Be,
Phoenix
Update soon!
Blessed Be,
Phoenix
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a GREAT fanfic i normally dont read HP fanfics but this is great
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello, you.
I rarely comment on anyone\'s stories, although i think i just may have an obsession over reading them [but don\'t tell anyone I know.] my point being: I have read _a lot_ of fac fiction. Both Potter and non-Potter.
Some stories on AFF are complete and utter crap [no offense to anyone] and once I stumble upon those stories, I don\'t read past the first chapter. So the fact alone that I\'ve read your fic from the very start till this point should be enough proof that you are in fact a rather good writer.
My guess is that the bitchy reviewer was just some frustrated moron who knows nothing about writing. [or has overly high standards. after all, presumably almost every AFF author is an amateur, not a pro.]
So keep up with your writing and never mind those kinds of reviews. If someone genuinely dislikes a story, then it is not likely that they\'ll give it the time of day to actually review it.
Oh, and just to make it clear - I am not a 12-year-old. [actually 18, but that\'s embarrassing considering I read H/D fics]
[and do excuse my poor grammar and spelling. i do not speak english as my mother tongue, so i\'m very blind to my own mistakes. or is it _for_ my mistakes...? Oh, who cares!]
Hmm. I suppose that was it. Nothing more to say. Oh, oh! Exept: Do not dare to stop writing this fic or I\'ll find you and... and... do terrible terrible things to you! Yes, that\'s right! You _should_ be scared.
Damn I\'m tired.
I\'ll just stop now.
I rarely comment on anyone\'s stories, although i think i just may have an obsession over reading them [but don\'t tell anyone I know.] my point being: I have read _a lot_ of fac fiction. Both Potter and non-Potter.
Some stories on AFF are complete and utter crap [no offense to anyone] and once I stumble upon those stories, I don\'t read past the first chapter. So the fact alone that I\'ve read your fic from the very start till this point should be enough proof that you are in fact a rather good writer.
My guess is that the bitchy reviewer was just some frustrated moron who knows nothing about writing. [or has overly high standards. after all, presumably almost every AFF author is an amateur, not a pro.]
So keep up with your writing and never mind those kinds of reviews. If someone genuinely dislikes a story, then it is not likely that they\'ll give it the time of day to actually review it.
Oh, and just to make it clear - I am not a 12-year-old. [actually 18, but that\'s embarrassing considering I read H/D fics]
[and do excuse my poor grammar and spelling. i do not speak english as my mother tongue, so i\'m very blind to my own mistakes. or is it _for_ my mistakes...? Oh, who cares!]
Hmm. I suppose that was it. Nothing more to say. Oh, oh! Exept: Do not dare to stop writing this fic or I\'ll find you and... and... do terrible terrible things to you! Yes, that\'s right! You _should_ be scared.
Damn I\'m tired.
I\'ll just stop now.
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
??? don\'t be discourage by those flames, ^^; i think it\'s a great story and people seem to like reading it, hell, you got more than 60 reviews from 5 chapters and majority of the stories here in AFF haven\'t even got half of reviews this story has and they even have more chapters. =.=; the one who flamed you is either just a jealous bitch! (sorry for the language) or just a person who has nothing to do with their pathetic life. *gives cookie* i hope you feel better...and update this soon ^___________________^
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to send you this note even before read this chapter (I\'ll review after I read it too) to let you know that I think it\'s disgusting when someone sends a review like that. If they dislike it so much they can hit the back button & not read any more of your stuff. Interestingly enough, there\'s another author on ff.net who also received an awful review along the same genre as what you\'re describing. She was so upset by the review that she didn\'t update her fic for several days. I wonder what some reviewers are thinking! Priss
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I think this story is wonderful. Don\'t let one dumb reviewer get you down. There are just some very childish people out there. I really don\'t see the problem with your grammer either, but hey that could just be me. I really like the story so far, I really see this going somewhere. I love story where Harry and Draco have to bond. This story is really good so far, keep writing. Update soon!! I want more...lol
Bye,
Pamela^_^
Bye,
Pamela^_^
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have a suggestion, fuck that fanfic whore! I am certainly not 12, not do I pity you. You are a TALENTED writer. I should know because I only review the best! If you want my opinion, she\'s just jealous because you can weave a FANTASTIC tale, and she cannot. Even if there was a gun to her head. Also, getting a flame like that suggests that she herself is or was a writer and got flamed once too. She probably can\'t help but put good people, like yourself, down. Once again, it all comes to jealousy.
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