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for Forced Bonding

by ladyblaze2511

person Queen mAlice
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like it so far. I really really want the next chapter, but I can\'t say much, I\'m being quite slow with my own story...
person CrAzEe_E_GrEeN
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your portrayal of narcissa. i like fics where she\'s not cruel and cold. thank goodness for the screen, it gives me a queasy feeling thinking of a pervy dumbledore...anyway good chapter! keep it up! ^_^

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person Shame Ness
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww The horror of it all. poor lads can\'t have no intersourse not bloody fair I tell ya. I love this, and so sorry bout that person who reviewed rudely I hate it when people to that, critisim is nice, but I would hope 12 yr. olds don\'t read this, but I actually know some that do, cuz it is so easy to get into the sites, but hey what can you do. Can\'t wait for the ritual, cuz ya know *intercourse* I love it when people shag specially those two. its just so nummy!!!!!!! (do you happen to know where the line \"Your a nummy treat\" comes from, cuz i would be happy if you did) and im gonna shut up, sorry bout the think I talk to much.

Update soon like!
person SaiyanDemonBob
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just ignore those stupid people! If they found your writing style so horrible, then why would they continue to read it? I mean \"FanFiction\" is an amateurs place to create from their imaginations, not someone else\'s! So if they keep harassing you about it, igonre them, they need to learn some manners, and to keep their fucking mouths shut! Oh! And I like your story, I\'m gonna harass my friends into reading it, like a lot of the other...ummm...let me check! Okay I got it! Over 600+ stories about Draco/Harry slash! Geez, I read so many fanfics, and yet I have had the 5th book since it came out, and a year later I only read the first 2 chapters...I\'ll read it one day...eventualy! BYE! *waving frantically* -BOB!
person Fefs
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
They are pleased with the \"apartment\" and i\'m VERY pleased with this fic! And this chapter! I loved the way you described their relationship growing! Thinking about family and stuff.. Please update soon, ok? And please make all chapter long like this? I love this fic!!!
Oh.. about the flame.. just tell the person to go fuck herself... I recall her nickname is quite matching with this activity! see\'ya!
person Sakya
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I know I told you I supported you and everything but I really have to yell at you now...

NO SEX BEFORE THE BONDING???? What are you? a sadist? Poor kids (and me), I mean... come on. At least hurry up with the bonding already.

(btw, you don\'t have to do as I say, It\'s just preassure from a reader who wants steemy scenes too soon for her own good).

Well, I did my yelling, feels like a job well done, so I sit back and wait for the up dates.

(/me making puppy eyes) P-p-p-please!!!
person Olivia
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*whimper* new chappie? PLZ!!!!!
person Anon
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your story and I\'m not 12 yaer old I\'m actualy 18 , well almost 18. Don\'t listen to the reviewer that said that your story was horrible, it\'s not.
person mechee
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy you continued I thought you were going to stop writting this story. I have one question are you going to update every day i hope so that makes me have something to look forword to. As for the chapter I like that you brought Dracos mom in to thank Harry Why is Snape such an ass.(grrrrrr) He makes me sick. YOu are doing such a good mechee
person Priss368
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute chapter! I like how the boys are actually talking to one another & not fighting the whole time. Can\'t wait for the next installment! Priss