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That was a friggin awesome chapter!!! I wicked enjoyed it, it was very well writen and incredibly tasteful as far a sex scenes go! Great job!!! I can\'t wait for the next chapter, keep up the awesome work and please update soon!

Aww that was a beautiful bonding, I loved it. I really loved when Draco turned around so he could see Harry and the thought that afterwards he was purring is so adorable. Can\'t wait for more.

Hugs

Kat

Why are girls so much better are writting gay smut then guys are? My own attempts are so pitifule I can\'t finish them. I like how you take your reviewers suggestions. I read so article about appealing to the consumer in the Econimist the other day about stuff like that. I hope you continue this story. I have an idea for a future sex scene*giggles*. While I really love to Harry ontop, the thought of Draco fucking him will Harry is in a catholic school girl outfit is so adorable. You know, buckle shoes, white knee socks, little pleated skirt, he need not were a shirt. It could start with Harry prancing about, maybe giving Draco a lap dance? I don\'t know, maybe the not what you Females like. Regardless of weather or not you chose to use my idea, I love your storie and i hope you post agian soon.

P.S. I know that some of your reviewers have brought forth the concept of a male preg. Let me say that I hope you don\'t do this. This is a wonderful story, I adore it, it is fantastic, but I hunt you down and burn you if you destroy it with one of those disgusting male pregs. I also can\'t imaging Draco doing something as undignafide a giving birth, though my mother told when I was young that \"it\'s nothing the forth time around.\"

I am sorry if I sound overly negative, but I have very strong views on this sort of thing! You have done nothing that would make me think you would curse your story with a male preg. Just to be clear THIS IS NOT A PHLAME, I have nothing but compliments for your writing, and I think so far the story is divine.

Yours
QueenlyKing

Na na nah.. i just decided! The bond will be on the next chapter! humrum.. it will be! And congratulations! This fic is only getting better! Please update the BOND CHAPTER really fast or i will die. I\'m sure you don\'t want to feel guilty for that so just do it! *fefs gets on her knees* Please? Preatty please with a cherry on top? Hugs!!

i am glad you brought in Harry\'s two best friends befor they bonded Those two are too funny. Harry and draco Kisses and hummped???? I dont think it will take much for them to bond if they are already doing that. I always knew those two liked each other no matter how much they argue and fight that is just their form of for-play Keep up the good work.

Is the bonding thing going to be the whole chapter? And congradulate whoever thought of the screen thing...poor Draco and/or Harry...XD
Please have the next chapter up soon k?

Laika de Lioncourt...always and forever Darknessmiko

Evil leaving us hanging. Just kidding the suspense will do me good. This is very well written by the way. I have very much enjoyed the story so far. sigh i suck at reviews. Keep up the good work.

AWW I love this story, and the tentative love springing up between them. I think its good, and I read the note you had about the nasty review, I don\'t know how long ago it was given but I\'m 23 and I like this story and besides, screw it. You stated it correctly, never write for others, write for yourself. You will get your best work out of it then. Good going and keep those updates coming, now you got me hooked

HI! i love your story so far(as of right now i\'m on chapter five) but i\'m kinda confused about somthing. you say that Voldemort will wnat to bond with Draco over christmas, which how i get it anyway is rahter soon. but then you also state that they are leaving school in not to long of a period of time. well how does that work? if christmas is soon wouldnt\' they still have like five months of school? or does it take longer then that for the bond to form? or am i jsut completely off with the time frame?i was jsut wondering.i got confused with them talking about hwat they were wanting to do out of hogwarts in case you wondering what the heck o was talking about. i\'m going to read more! i really like your story so far!! :)
okay, i\'m done now, i really like it so far, but you honestly get them together rather fast don\'t you? not that i\'m complaining at all. i ahte the strories where lamost thrirty chapter inot it they...kiss. but you had them humping already. rather frisky aren\'t they? and they dont\' really talk things out. someone says somethinga dn the other agrues you back one but if the other has a good excuse its alreight then. not that i should say anything because i think i probably do that to. Honestly though i\'m nto at all trying to be rude or discurage you. i really like this and i cna\'t iwat til you have mroe! i know i hate when ppl reaview something with \'good\' and thats it. i want to know what i cna do better. i mean i like getting informed about what\'s good but i wnat to know what to improve more adn so i\'m simply trying to help.
sorry if you dont\' like long reviews. but, even if you don\'t like them, feel special becasue i think this is probably the third longest one i have ever given. so go you! i really can\'t wait till you have more of this story out. Its wonderful!! :D