rate_review Reviews

okay...you really must understand why people don't review. I mean, I have gotten past people not reviewing myself. But in reference to your second chapter on the other story, it is no wonder why people won't leave a review to that. I mean, do you like people yelling at you? And telling you what you had better damn well do??? I am sure you don't.

At any rate, this was more believable of the characters than the other version. But it is your stories, so do not bow down to peer pressure and change just for the readers. You should write for yourself and no one else. If other people like and enjoy your writings then that is just icing on the cake...

I liked both versions but I deffantly liked seeing Ginny with a backbone!!!! Good fic... keep up the good work!

I\'m sorry but that\'s completely ruined that for me. I love to read about the sweet and shy version of Harry just as much as the next person. But I can honestly say you had the right idea with the original version. I felt the slightly more darker attitude in the first version set the tone of the story so much better. If people didn\'t like the dark less then shy side to Harry they should have not read your story. Sure he tied her to the bed, but anyone would think you had written entier full hard core bondage scene.

Jaymalfoypotter.

...it was still submission, just not violent. maybe you don\'t get it.