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for Flame of Existence

by Arabella

person JJ
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! I truly dislike rape sequences, but your was more implied than explicit. More impoprtantly, the developing relationship between Herm. and Snape is definitely worth it!!!! This chapter was heartbreaking. So Herm. is having nightmares about Snape - great plot device. Now Snape has to regain ground he didn\'t even know he\'d lost. You handled the Harry incident nicely: explaining much without making him out to be an idiot. How is Snape going to court Herm? Or is he going to back-off again now that she\'s pulling back? Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!! Update soon ;-)
person asmus
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story. I hope you update soon. It\'s terrible to leave it like that.
person sarah
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i hate cliff hangers! hurry up and post soon. ~laterz~
person betty
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fuck me, this is a great story. Read it all in one sitting. Keep up the good work. Only please keep Hermione depressed, it pairs her well with Snape\'s reluctant hero.
person Eddie The Black Maru
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAHHH!!!! that was SOO very awesome! I wonder when our little Malfoy will come back and play and what game will he be playing. I liked the chappie you showed him a softer light, I guess even ferrets are human (lol) but I wonder where you will go with it. you\'ve got me.
Much Love
Eddie
person bellasol67
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is quite intense...I like how Ron is popular with the ladies! Poor Harry, I\'m guessing he kissed Hermione because he doesn\'t know what else to do.
What a nice little cliffhanger you left us with...what will Draco do? Poor Snape, torn between what he wants and what is proper. Hermione had to make the first move, but I would imagine that she would be a little bit more reserved considering what had happened to her...but hey, it\'s your story and I\'m only along for the ride. Hope you update soon and keep up the good work.
person JTBJAB
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hermione smiled.
person meegwun
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! How wonderful! You\'ve made the transition to love so believable. I can\'t wait for more.
person ShilohDarke
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MAN!!! I am hooked!!! PLEASE update soon, as I am going to go mad waitint to read what happens next! Good for Hermione! I hope she just lets him have a good dose of Affection! He\'s in desperate need of it!
person Shadowknight
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent work you\'ve done. Dark and moody, yet full of hope. Well done, and I await chapter 10 with baited breath. Few typos, and grammar works well. All in all, a piece of excellent storytelling.