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for Flame of Existence

by Arabella

person JTBJAB
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! Oh my god! Please let Ron make a full recovery!

And the bit at the end....was so sweet!

Please update asap!
person Susan
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well..Chapter (lucky)13 was an angst filled chock-a-block of information and emotion. Lucius is still a nut-job dick. Well done there. Your version of Severus is alternately cold and kind. Reminds me of that song \"Cruel to be Kind\" LOL. You are doing a great job. Thanks for the update
person JJ
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Snape\'s a fool. But then again, Herm. is soooo much younger than he is. He\'s got a point - she only came onto him after the rape. A pretty long and convoluted path to helping the greasy git understand his feelings. Way to go Herm.!
person JTBJAB
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* another brilliant chapter that came to an end......please update asap!
person K
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love checking back on this and seeing theres a new chapter. Keep \'em coming!
person maddy
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
uhm, when will you update again?
I think the story is really progressing now and I must say I like it very much.
Please update soon so I can let my nerves rest a bit. (grins and winks at you)

I\'ll wait patiently....

Hugs Maddy
person JTBJAB
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, that silly Hermione!

Please update soon!
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aside from the somewhat disjointed thought flow (may want to find a beta, not sure if you already have one or not), I think this is actually a good segway(sp?). The confusing thoughts that Hermione would have about her behaviour seem expected I think as well as the behaviour of \"throwing herself at\" Snape, her \"saviour\". I think that self esteem and self worth play greatly in how a person would view themselves as well as those around them in recovering from a rape, the feeling of helplessness lowering both of those in respect to how a person views themself. Good work, I am looking forward to seeing how this will work itself out, rape is a difficult issue to work with and around.
person Susan
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am still so glad you are not rushing this. I feel so bad for Hermione and your portrayal of her seems very real. Hopefully, Snape will step up again soon and help her. Well written and well thought out. Update soon!
person meegwun
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i was so excited when i went to the hermione/snape page and your story was near the top! i\'ve been anxiously awaiting an update. :) please keep writing, i am not ashamed to say i am a bit addicted.