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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story..i don\'t know if it is the plot or the style of writing, but it\'s really good. Congrats on an original plot. Am looking forward to the next chapter
~Sandra~
~Sandra~
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok i love the way the story is going so far. does he tell the headmaster, or does herminone? i wanna know. add more chapters
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG. I actually have tears in my eyes. Poor Hermione, \"I want to go home. I don\'t want to be a witch anymore.\" Oh how are things going to get better? Snape has to save her! Keep it coming!
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again a very fine chapter...i was wondering when she was going to fait! I mean hardly eating, or sleeping days in a row obviously isn\'t good for you! I just have a question. You keep on mentioning her music from home and I was wondering what kind of music does she listen to? All in all awesome chapter (Snape seems a bit slow, the way it takes him to put two and two together though...oh well) GO YOU!!!
Later days
Later days
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow- this story is great! The character of Snape is believable, and so is Hermione as a rape victim. It\'s a real treat to read such well crafted fiction! Keep it it up:)
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excellent! eagerly awaiting the next chapter!!
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You SUCK! and by YOU SUCK! I mean i hat cliffs you always get so close and then you are about to fall over and that dam saftery line (end of update) is alwaays there to hold you back. I find this story to be superb and i wish for more updates whenevr you can.
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*scratches at monitor* It was getting VVVEERRRYYY good. bad writer! no clifies....they make the readers cry! Anyways, this story is really picking up speed. Now the headmaster had been put intp play. How will the detention go? Will Harry and Snape ever find out what really happened to Hermoine? Will the slimy ferret get whats coming to him? I await your update with baited breath.
Much Love
Eddie
Much Love
Eddie
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Bella!!
Loving the story hunny!! I cant wait to see where this goes!! I think you have captured an abused persons character correctly.
(In) Patiently awaitng the next chapter :-)
TaintedAngel xxx
Loving the story hunny!! I cant wait to see where this goes!! I think you have captured an abused persons character correctly.
(In) Patiently awaitng the next chapter :-)
TaintedAngel xxx
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 was great. I can\'t wait for 3 and her detention! You write a difficult subject with great tact and sensitivity too, well done.