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for Flame of Existence

by Arabella

person Jenn
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh....more...more....more!!!! lol I am so glad Draco got kicked out! About time! Can\'t think that\'s the end of him though. I can\'t wait til the next chapter!!!
person JJ
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting and inviting. Snape, in character, but acting more human. So he wants to give Herm. what Draco couldn\'t? I\'d like to see that! How does Dumbledore know what happens in his school? How could Ron and Harry be so blind? To go from the hero of the wizarding world to a shit? That parting shot - a true slitherin, a coward - was awesome! Dumbledore playing matchmaker? Been there, done that, and still want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I\'m enjoying your story very much. Please continue!
person Anon
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAHHHHHHHHH.........update soon! ~Joani
person JTBJAB
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Draco is outta there!

You know i find it amusing that this stuff happens all the time....two people liking each other, but the other one not knowing, and both of them are too scared to admit it!

Brilliant chapter and i look forward to the next update!
person Susan
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have lately avoided reading Hermione-rape-stories for the simple fact that things seem to resolve too quickly. That said, I think you are doing a marvelous job with this fiction. I like the trade-off of Snape\'s inner musings along with Hermione\'s. Their self-doubt is like having them looking a mirror...except not that trite. I really look forward to more and I hope that shit Malfoy really gets it.
person JTBJAB
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bless that meddling Dumbledore....please make him meddle some more!

I look forward to your next update!
person JJ
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m enjoying your story. You are handling the events in a realistic manner. I\'m surprised that Dumbledore is taking such a laid back attitute towards what he knows happened. Such a drastic personality change usually means just what happened, happened. I\'m also surprised that the Malfoy\'s are in this story and still have such power - especially since the war is over. They should have suffered some from the loss of Voldy. Anyway, your plot is interesting and I\'m looking forward to seeing where you go with this. I\'m sorry that Ron and Harry are such \'gits\' but I guess if they weren\'t, Snape wouldn\'t have to step in for them. I like the forshadowing that things will work out from Dumbledore.
person e.j
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i can\'t believe that hermione is so stubborn...she\'s will only kill herself if she keeps it all bottled up...hopefully she will tell somebody or anybody about what happen..poor thing...either keep up the good work...hope u\'ll update it soon...bye..
person Selenia Snape
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story... despite its dark tendencies! More soon?
person Branwen
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, their relationship is growing... can\'t wait to see what will happen next..please continue writing