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for Flame of Existence

by Arabella

person forge_underhill
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again a great chapter!!! Go you!!! Loving the evil cliffhanger and the fact that Harry\'s getting a bit pissed off at Ron. Quite saddened by the small amount of Snape you had there, so hoping there will be more in the next chapter!!!! Nobody seems to want to update here, so hope the new chapterwill arive soon! Once aagain go YOU!!!
person neko_chan
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice im liking this story a lot! keep it up its good to know you update often ^_^ cant wait till the next chapter
person JTBJAB
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! You have got to update soon!
person JJ
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Actually I\'m glad Draco can\'t kill. I\'d like to think, as a child/young adult, that it would be beyond him. I\'m also glad the Harry DOES care about Herm. I was worried that he was acting so out of character. I just hope its not too late for him to repair his relationship with Herm. Herm. is still telling Snape off? Brass balls if you ask me. Will it motivate him to stop thinking of her as a child, I wonder? I appreciate that she\'s still thinking about letting it all go. Once damage is done, it doesn\'t just go away that fast. Your character is being a little more realistic than most in her situation. I\'m still rooting for Snape and Herm. to figure it all out together! Thanks for continuing the story!
person lovethelab
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah Hell! Too funny! Will Snape respond or will he push her off and give her the \"I don\'t touch students\" lecture?? Great chapter!
person mysticsong
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this:

Draco stopped short and turned around to stare at his head-of-house.
person mysticsong
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! What a cliffie!!

I hope he doesnt get \"burned\" again. :o)
person Lu Ling QI
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! Wonderful! i absolutly love it and i love the direction it is taking, keep up the good work and update soon!
person Kathryne
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait for the next chapter. XD Damn Cliff Hangers
person Monkmess
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying your story. You don\'t seem to be pushing the story line much and I like that. Please keep it up, I can\'t wait to read more!!