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for lost way found

by serpent

person sevati
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the beginning of this, I hope you continue the story. One complaint though- the formatting is off. There\'s a horizontal scroll bar on the current (and only) chapter, and it makes it quite the bitch to read. I don\'t know if it\'s your doing, or aff\'s (it has been bitchy of late), but can you possibly fix it?
person Miari
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is WONDERFUL! MORE PLEASE! I\'m already emotionally invested in young Nick and hope to see him succeed. Where will that Sorting Hat put the lad? Will he be in Gryffindor like his trio of saviours or will he be plunked into Slytherin, as his parents were apparently DeathEaters? How will the rest of the staff of Hogwarts take to the lad? Will a certain Potions Master be drawn to the boy and act as paternal figure for him? It seems Hermione is sliding easily into the maternal role with her comments like \"before your ear rots off\" and the like. PLEASE update this soon! Thank you:)