rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

This is a great start: will you update soon? I like your characters, and I like the way Snape and Hermione have started off.

hey... love the fic, been checking in on it daily, but nothing\'s been happening. ARE YOU EVER GOING TO UPDATE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

please post some more soon, this story is building nicely, i\'m looking forward to where ur taking it, n although i cant deny smut is great, a story with characters and good plot line is making for some great reading. I was wondering though to making reading a bit easier could you put a space between paragraphs, my eyes get really sore from trying to read everything squashed together. Just a tip

other than that, great story, I hope you update it soon :)

Thank you thank you THANK YOU for managing to get the formatting straightened out! I re-read the first chapter and noticed a few things I had missed last time. I love the story so far, and can\'t wait for future installments!

Interesting premise for the new character. I hadn\'t thought what would happen to a muggle-born who was living on their own getting invited to Hogwarts, but now that you\'ve brought the idea up, my mind\'s racing in overdrive. How long will that money last Miles (I\'m guessing it\'s a montly check), will he have enough for all his supplies? I\'m guessing his battered backpack is stuffed to the brim with clothing since he\'s run away, but that still can\'t be much. How will the teachers react? Would they try to place him in a Wizarding version of the Muggle foster system, or might a Hogwarts teacher take him becoming his sponsor? Ah, the possibilities :)

*reaches her hands through the montior to shake writer* ARRGGHH! come on! where\'s lil\' Nick? I liked him...he was a cutie! Although, Miles is interesting too....but I miss Nick and Hermione and Harry. I even miss Ron. Your writing is improving...I CAN NOT WAIT untill you update again!!!!!!!!
Much Love
Eddie

wow...great story!! definatly gonna continue to read it...if you could contact me when you update that would be the awsomeest!! : D

I love this so far. Nice pacing, nice characterization of the regulars and the new characters, and an intriguing story idea. More, please!

Andy

I do hope that Miles and Nick will get along well, having come from such similar yet disparate backgrounds. What are you going at with Miles\'s eyes? Any time I\'ve ever read anything where a child had eyes of two colours, the child was always destined for great and/or unusual futures. Who will be taking Miles under his/her wing? Muggleborn Hermione had her parents to take her round and such, after all. Who will be appointed this boy\'s new foster parent? Someone on staff, perhaps? Is there some sort of agreement between the Ministry of Magic and other governmental ministries regarding foster children who turn out to be witches or wizards?
Oh, I just can\'t wait for the next installment!

It must be a bitch to update but....this is really good. REALLY REALLY GOOD. If ya don\'t update I\'ll have ta come over and chain ya to your computer untill you produce another chapter. It would be so much simplier if ya update ^.^
Much Love
Eddie