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by alialdeet

person luvhp
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW, what a sickeningly sweet story! And I absolutely loved it! :) Way to step up to the challenge.
person Megan Consoer
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Rain
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was wonderful. I was jumping around in my seat and squealing when Hermione was listening to Draco pour his heart out. I especially like the way that Draco assumed that Blaize must want Hermione because how could anyone spend so much time with her and not want her.
person lorett
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HA! LOOK AT MY LITTLE ALEX! Writing her own sweet, lemony story! Well, I think you did quite alright for your state of affairs when you wrote this. I think this is such a fun story. Such a departure from your more serious writing. You need to do more of it. I LIKE IT! What did I like best about this chappie? Well, I think I liked agressive Hermione. While I was reading this I was trying to really think what Hermione would be like in approaching Draco. Would she be the agressor? Would she know that he likes to be in charge and let him? Or would she match him, passion for passion all the way? I dunno. Probably a good mix of all, as Hermione is such a mix of personas...

Anyway, enough of my musings!

Fun as always! YIPPEE FOR HOT DRACO SEX SCENES!

YEA!

WE LOVE NAKED DRACO!

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person lazy
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
claps* yay! this is great! awsome! wonderful! magnificent! I LOVE IT!
person dragon34
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just like a Slytherin to set up another Slytherin with a Gryffindor. It\'s a very cute fic.
person Hanna Delacour
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There is more right? I love it! You have to continue this fic! It is wonderful! Update soon, I will be reading!
person anon
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a wonderful story. please continue!
person merbooks15824
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was so cute! I only wondered why you spelled yeah as ya. Other than that, good job and I hope there are more chapters.
person lorett
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WEE! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT!

My favorite part, well actually I have two or three but this is my first favorite part: