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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep going!!! I love it so far!!
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is pretty good. Please try and continue it. I\'m really liking it.
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I love your story!! I love the way you are handling it as well. I hope to read more in the near future! Keep updating and lease update soon!!
Jesslynne
Jesslynne
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update and soon!
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh this is so good. please update soon
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bree,
I find your story very interesting. The slow development of Harrys\' and Severus\' relationship is very sexy. You torment me though when that relationship takes a step backwards and has to be rebuilt. ARGGGGGHHHHH!!!!!!
When do we get to know Professor Wile, the new DADA instructor? What part does he play in your story. I would definately develop the new character, Hmmmm, Prof. Wile, like in wiley???
You have many descriptive scenes which are just delicious. I sometimes find that the story continuity jumps a bit, in that all of a sudden the flow is interrupted. Just keep the descriptions up, take your time and praise your Beta in doing a great job too. The long chapters are great too! I really, really appreciate the prologues? and epilogues? you put in to set the stage, so the reader knows where this story left off and what to expect in the next chapter.....toooo delicious, (dripping wet, mmmmm).
Many chocolate frogs your way to help you update soon.
I find your story very interesting. The slow development of Harrys\' and Severus\' relationship is very sexy. You torment me though when that relationship takes a step backwards and has to be rebuilt. ARGGGGGHHHHH!!!!!!
When do we get to know Professor Wile, the new DADA instructor? What part does he play in your story. I would definately develop the new character, Hmmmm, Prof. Wile, like in wiley???
You have many descriptive scenes which are just delicious. I sometimes find that the story continuity jumps a bit, in that all of a sudden the flow is interrupted. Just keep the descriptions up, take your time and praise your Beta in doing a great job too. The long chapters are great too! I really, really appreciate the prologues? and epilogues? you put in to set the stage, so the reader knows where this story left off and what to expect in the next chapter.....toooo delicious, (dripping wet, mmmmm).
Many chocolate frogs your way to help you update soon.
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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sexy.
cdk
cdk
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Enjoying your story very much! So good!
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi, I loved it pleas wright another chapter pretty pleas
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying your story a lot.
cdk
cdk