rate_review Reviews

I love the ending.. I think that\'s the best way to go. Plus Harry finally gets to be with his mum dad and lover all at one time

~SeverinKSnape

wow great job of writing this. I like it alot. It\'s interesting and funny. hehe. The ending remind me of the titanic. Especially when rose and jack passed through the next world meeting the rest of the crew who died during the boat accident. It\'s kind of sweet actually. I like the kinky scene. hehhe it\'s quite romantic. Keep up the good work. :P It\'s actually good to see albus\'s demons is the actually terror that killing all those innocents.

i loved your story. it maded me cry at the end. i hope you write more storys.

Is there a chapter missing?
its just you went from having Harry and Sev fighting to the prolog. i kinda thought there was something missing.
anyway, the story is realy good. i like your writhing stile, im reading Teddy as well.
Hope to read more of your work.

*cries* that was so sweet i loved the ending ^^ can\'t wait to see more of your work

Unfortunately, it\'s easy to see that you grew tired with your story and wanted to get rid of it as quickly and completely as possible. There\'s a significant gap between the last chapter and the one before it. I also despise these unimaginative endings in which the main characters live happily ever after, die together peacefully, and even the state of their afterlife is provided.

Your time-line is REALLY, REALLY off! If Harry left 6 years ago while still in school, how did Ron manage to have kids that were of school age? They had 4 kids already and she was pregnant with the 5th when Harry (Whitefang) met up with them again. That means Hermione would have gotten pregnant while still in school. Also, Serius got out of Azkaban just before Harry\'s third year and met up with Remus a few months later and then fell through the veil in Harry\'s 5th year. If his daughter is 11, Remus got pregnant almost twelve years ago. Harry was missing 6 of those 12, so even if he didn\'t leave til 7th year, that means SHE could not possibly be any older than 10 TOPS. Actually, closer to 9.

wow just like that thats very unfair could you not have done it like life after voldermort of hp fadom or somthing !! that was just a shock i didint expect it to end ubruptly !!

good story,I love it,bye

WHHHHAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! It\'s over!!!!

Yes, I believe that Harry and Severus would have wanted to die together, but I imagined that all their family would be there as well.

Very touching, none the less.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story and will look forward to the next one you write.

Thank you very much.