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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! Please keep it up. Do you have any more elsewhere or your own website with your stories?
Chris
Chris
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This story is pretty damb good, so far. Hope you update soon.
-Raven J. McCullough
-Raven J. McCullough
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m intrigued by this story and where it\'s going. Please update soon.
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You sooo have to continue with this, it is amazing, no starting it and leaving it off. I loved the story, please please write more, and soon! Great story telling by the way.
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was fast. Loving it even more. \"Charlie?\" Maybe Charlie Wesley?
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. great story, i hope to see an update soon. i certainly didnt see charlie coming.
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. Nice twist with Charlie, especially the cracks about rabbits. Hope to see more.
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wolfie,
Great start to this story. A very unique angle.
Only one comment, the names changing is a little confusing. Maybe next time you could introduce your characters so that their real names and nick names are identified, maybe with their descriptions? Just a thought. It may work with a little more character development too.
I love the pangs that SilverFang gets for Severus Snape. Can\'t wait for that to develop.....lol
Crystal should be Slytherin as it\'s a dominant trait and so Lupins\' and Sirius\' child should be in Slytherin, not Gryffindor like Lupin and Sirius were. Canon says that Sirius\' family was all Slytherin, him being the only throw-back.
Love the idea of Poppy having apprentices, I\'ve only read one other story with that trait, but it was a little different.
Great work, keep it up and post soon.
Great start to this story. A very unique angle.
Only one comment, the names changing is a little confusing. Maybe next time you could introduce your characters so that their real names and nick names are identified, maybe with their descriptions? Just a thought. It may work with a little more character development too.
I love the pangs that SilverFang gets for Severus Snape. Can\'t wait for that to develop.....lol
Crystal should be Slytherin as it\'s a dominant trait and so Lupins\' and Sirius\' child should be in Slytherin, not Gryffindor like Lupin and Sirius were. Canon says that Sirius\' family was all Slytherin, him being the only throw-back.
Love the idea of Poppy having apprentices, I\'ve only read one other story with that trait, but it was a little different.
Great work, keep it up and post soon.
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It would be an understatement to say that I was confused a lot while I was reading it, but the chapter 5 helped clear a lot of that up. Im still confused as to why harry hasnt at least told Dumbledore who he is, or someone. And who are his two friends, is one Charlie Weasley?
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is... quite interesting thus far. A plot that isn\'t terribly over-used, and an interesting spin on said plot.
It makes me sad that Sirius would beat his child, but I can see him doing it, with his temperment.
Can\'t wait for an update!
It makes me sad that Sirius would beat his child, but I can see him doing it, with his temperment.
Can\'t wait for an update!