rate_review Reviews

awesome story loved it totally wicked you did a great job

that was lovely.i like the way you write, fast paced and energetic.

Oh my That was so sad beautifull but sad I did love it though. Well done I look forward to more od your Writings

Well, to be honest, i think you rush the ending a bit and it kind of reduces the dramatic effect of what the ending is supposed to be. I wish you'd write more about the babies though. One thing that confuses me is why does harry go away by himself and for what reason? Also who the hell is that master???? Besides, i geniuely think that the characters are too OCC. I guess you should write the chapters in details and in longer length; the storyline and the idea is good but the chapters are too short to appreciate the good storyline. Continue writing and it's a good way to improve (that's what i believe). Ja ne. :D

I adored the ending. It was peacefuland final, and wraped it up nicely. The only thing I don't like is the fact that you left out the conclusion to the fight. Its like you skiped a chapter inbetween! Still, I don;t think I would change it. No sense messing with a good thing.

I cries at the end anyway!!! *bawls her eyes out*

^-^...... hehe, liked the scene were Harry says all his past lovers names; it was making a rather funny picture........ and the plot was very great to ^_^

no i thought it was a cute fluffy ending!! real happily ever after, u no? anyway great fic cya xx

This is brilliant! I love you forever and want to bear your children (only maybe not).

Wow. Do not, I repeat do NOT change the ending. You almost had me in tears with the sappyness of it all. It was great. plus your voldermort idea was ingenious and purely creative I would love to learn about any other stories you have writen!