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for Deflora

by CelticCross83

person Storm
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH my God! Lucius was freaking hilarious. I love it. This is so great and I can\'t wait to hear Harry\'s reaction to Severus about to become intimate with him. Yay! can\'t wait to read your next update.
person Smarter than you
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You don\'t think that chapter (2) was explicit? My God, it would be a XXXXX in a movie theater!
person Mine Kampf
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that sucked don\'t post anymore of it. it absolutley blew and i hated it u stupid faggot
person lacquer
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For some reason, the idea of Harry in the dark side is quite appealing.
Might there be a possibility of an LM/HP/SS pairing?
Just curious...
Draco seems quite innocent, I do wonder, what will his relationship with Harry be? Will it be their rivalry or friendship?
It may be better if you lengthened the chapters a bit....
person Tinkerhell
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your story so far and would like to see Tom/Draco/Snape, or even after Snape has defloured Harry all four have a go at it togther.I like when Draco\'s everyones submissive little pet. Well keep up the good work and please update soon!!!
person Lisn
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! Ron and Lucious??? Oh HELL YES!!!!
person lacquer
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, another interesting plot has piqued my interest. I should like to see where the story is going. Not one the usual ones I read but this one\'s an exception. . . Please update soon...
person Eli
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope that this is 15 or over, because I absolutely adore this story.its wonderfully written and I love the general idea of it. Please please! continue. It wouls be greatly appreciated.

-Eli
person Kitsune Morgan
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When I read the title I didn\'t know what to think. When I read the first chapter I laughed at Peter and him not getting what he so wanted. When I read the second chapter I cheered about the fact that Tom wasn\'t a brutal lover. I would so hate to see Draco taken that way. I read the thrid and I laughed at the way that Tom scolded Severus for letting him self go. I hope that Severus gets to have a go with Harry. Well I\'m interested to see if you have Harry come over to the dack side. And if he does he finds a lover who will treat him right. Shit hand him over to Luscius and have them fall in love. Well I hope that you write more soon. Can\'t wait to read. TTFN
person L
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Continue, please?