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by asukasange

person Jes
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I like the story line and how Harry came to stay at Severus\' for the Summer. I like how you kept Harry and Severus in character for the most part. Kudos to you! :)

I would also love to see some more flashbacks for Harry and maybe for Severus. Are you going to do the whole story from harry\'s point of view or will you switch off? Either is fine, really.


Well, I cannot wait for the next chapter. please continue!
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh I love it I love it! Please continue soon. I love how sweet Snape was to Harry in the last bit of that chapter! Brilliant