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Will harry use his ability to make people to love him at narcissa and later bellatrix? After all it would be a good ravange for both of them.. Not only that, he also will get a powerfull slave and and eyes and ears in voldy iner circle.

You should finnish this story, it is good.

Thanks for writing what you have completed

MPF

Update soon please

this is the best written story i've read, with a great plotline.

Hi,

I really like your story.
I'm a bit disapointed because it's a long time since it has not been updated.
Is there any way you'll continue and finish it ?
If you have any news : ryoxyz@free.fr
Laurent

BRILLIANT STORY! I LOVE IT! I do hope that you continue this little gem of naughtiness.
Things aren't rushed and you actually can spell and use proper pronunciations and
grammar usage. Please please please have Harry 'capture' Ginny, Hermoine, Luna, and every
female that you can name in this wonderful series. I've always thought Hermoine to be a bit
of a kink and I know Ginny is one for a little bondage. Luna alway struck me a 'normal' sexpert.
Taking Mrs. Malfoy and having him naughty things to her would be smashing. OMG! Maybe a threesome
with the Patil sisters!! Don't forget Pansy so Harry shove that in Dracos' face. Thanks again for
the story and I've added this to my favorites. And I'd love to read and prepostings and offer any
suggestions I might have. Ryan

Great story, keep it up!

keep it up

the best fanfiction on this site. well written, erotic, easy to read, intelligent...your really pretty talented. though im sure you retired long ago, if you ever return to this i strongly suggest adding more chapters. i'd love to read em!

cotiniu soon nt make narsica also one of harry women