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for Leaving a Mark

by sappysappysappy

person June W
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 1 - excellent beginning! I\'m glad he\'s not in danger of going to Azkaban, but sorry he\'s not recognized for his war efforts. No Order of Merlin? \"Succulent Vulcan\" - what a name! I hope you update regularly and soon!
person lilly
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it but I can not imagine Hermione being willing to have a baby for money. An intersting story I like it please continue.
person azulkan2
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy, really like the sound of this one. Can\'t wait for more. Soon please.
person cocoachristy
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And so it begins!!!!!!!!! Can\'t wait for chapter 2!!!!!
person Canadianna
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this first chapter. I can\'t wait to read more. ~Angela
person Bambu
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I snickered as I read this opening chatper. Certain phrases, \'procuring a mother,\' and when calculating the final product were simply very, very funny. I can so easily see Severus Snape evaluating his situation in such a fashion. I\'ll look forward to your next update.