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Snape\'s quick realization is wonderful. Hermione didn\'t know what hit her. Very nicely done. (BTW I believe it is Minoan). I am keeping an eye out for your updates.

Great story.

Feel like I missed something at the end --- she knows why Snape is there but he doesn\'t know why she is there so the order to meet him tomorrow seems a bit out of place.

nice start to the story. I like how you\'ve skipped over (or delayed) the usual drama associated with this type of story. good luck with it.

Hi, \'Teletourgiko Prasines Arthro Mana\' does not make any sense at all. It would translate as : Ritual green (<-plural, female) Article Mother. Like your story though, please continue

Ch 2 - wow, that\'s a great explanation for why Hermione would become a surrogate! Umm, I am assuming that the pregnancy involves sex - that it\'s just Muggles who make babies by test-tube combination of egg and sperm? Are her parents alive? It sounds like the baby has to be a boy, so they would need a potion or something to handle that. He needs to tell her that he wants complete privacy, but since she has already told the Weasleys (and therefore everyone) that she is going to be a surrogate, she\'s going to have to hide from her friends until the baby\'s birth? \'Cuz if her friends see her pregnant and with Snape, well, there goes his privacy. Thanks for the chapter! Looking forward to the next.

Oh cool! I was wondering what reasons people would have for hermionie to agree to this. You\'ve come up with a good one. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Interesting start. I was skeptical in how you would get each of them to agree to this, but you\'ve pulled off a plausible explanation. Update soon! :)

Oh my I liked this chapter even more. Can\'t wait to see what the ritual is. More soon please.

Very interesting reason for wanting to be a surrogate. Very creative!!! Hope the next chapter is up soon!

This is NIFTY! And you are not sappy, dear. I love the McGuffin--it\'s perfect!