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that was awesome, I just went all over my keyboard lol. plzwrite more.

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OMG, that was awesome! Just fucking awesome! If anyone give this negative feedback, if it dosn\'t turn them on, then they need to go back to their home planet because they aren\'t human!

Bravo!! A very excellent job for your first NC-17 fic. You should definitley write more. You have a knack for it.

i just absolutely loved it. No second chapter?

Ap

This is way sexxy!

Criticism? How could anyone possibly find something wrong with this? The dialouge was hot and intimate, I could almost hear the passion dripping in their voices. The description was great, and very detailed, I had no problem invisioning it (great imagery :D). The actual interaction was very hot, very passionate, very arousing. I was also pleasantly surprised to see that your grammar and spelling was nearly impeccable (something that is usually a turnoff for me when it\'s not present). Not only it this a great fic, but also one of the best F/F fics I\'ve ever read, if not the absolute best fic I\'ve ever read. If you would expand to write longer stories setting up the actual act, I\'d be dedicated to reading every last splendid word you type. Fantastic, I loved it, and I will hunt you down if you don\'t publish more. :D Just kidding.

Keep up the great work!
Seph

I .love your story AMAZEING!

And just 2 tell you im so horny right now write another i love your work but as you probaly know ihav other things 2 take care of right now : )